User talk:Barratboy

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I deleted a page because it was coming up as orphaned. No pages were linking to it. Maybe you editted the page that was supposed to link to it and didn't realize that you'd broken the link. --Platypus 12:22, 22 June 2010 (UTC)

Yep, that's what it looks like. Thanks for catching it! --Barratboy

Hi there! I just wanted to swing by to say how much I enjoyed your writing in Hardon High! Not just the delicious content, but the style of writing is really quite impressive! In particular, the scenes involving the arrogant stud in the Jock Club - riding him not once, but twice, and his transition from the cocky jock to a submissive bottom! Just fantastic! Haha, I kinda wish that we could continue to have our way with the jock rather than have him default to the hairy guy at the end of the whirlpool scene, but I suppose the story has to end some time! Anyhoo, great job, maestro! Excellent work! -- JakeStorm93

Question

I just want to start off by saying that your "Birthday Bottom Boy's Blackout Bar-night" text story is, by far, the best one on this entire site. It's basically the only reason I come back to this site at all.

I just had a quick question. Did you have any plans at all to move the story to some sort of Twine/HTML format? I feel like it would be much more accessible that way and also be downloadable, making it easier for more people to play it. SilverS 02:06, 30 July 2017 (UTC)

I see you haven't been online since I left the above message, sadly. The reason I was asking is that, if you were not planning to do as such, I would be willing to do it for you. I've been wanting to practice with how Twine works so that, if I make my own text game in the future, i'd be more prepared on how to use it. Also, your game is amazing and I think more people should experience it. SilverS 05:32, 3 September 2017 (UTC)

I have no idea what Twine is, but you're certainly more than welcome. I haven't done much lately because finding the bits I haven't finished became so difficult, there's no way I see here to let me know where I have entries left to write. barratboy

"I haven't done much lately because finding the bits I haven't finished became so difficult"

Ah ha ha! I (and Twine) can help you with that. Since i've been labeling any red-linked pages with (Unfinished) at the end of the title name. So I can just run a search for that and it'll show me all the passages with that in the title. Not done with the Twine version yet. Not even close, really. I've finished more or less the entire go upstairs routes and i'm doing the downstairs stuff now. I haven't even gotten to the Spa stuff yet, which is a whole other chunk of content. 1000+ pages really is a lot.

Would you like me to link you to passages just before red-linked pages or would you rather wait until the Twine version is done (but that might be a while)? SilverS 16:37, 18 September 2017 (UTC)

Here, i've gone ahead and uploaded a version with what i've got done so far to Mega so you can take a look.

mega. nz/#!ZnBBjDpA!717t3J3TpeXpezbePKc1ExbcNUZok5wJGGYbD8vc_-4

(Make sure to remove the space. I added that to get around the anti-link-posting bot this site has) Remember that only the paths from the upstairs route are really done right now. SilverS 17:11, 18 September 2017 (UTC)

That's brilliant! Thank you! And yes, I'd love the links to the unfinished pages, however you can send them is fine! barratboy

Okay, here's a list of the pages just before a red page.

• "How about we try the sling, sir?"
• "I'm sorry, I didn't see you there."
• Take him up on his first idea and slide under the table.
• "Let's go hang out with the guys."
• Flip the coins. Penny: heads, Quarter: tails.
• Flip the coins. Penny: tails, Quarter: tails.
• "If I asked you guys to do whatever you wanted to me, what would it be?"
• "Me and the Pig there have a date in the alley."
• Thank them for the offer, but admit you find the idea of a threesome a bit overwhelming.
• Tell them you're excited to pick out a toy.
• Approach the rutting pair and try to join in.
• "I didn't get to taste it at all, actually."
• "I've always wanted to ride a sling. Lead the way."
• "What're your offers, guys?"
• "First I'm gonna go get myself something to drink."
• "No man, thanks for the beer!"
• "For a bear to maul me tonight."
• "You got any favorites, daddy?"
• "How about I just turn around right here, daddy?"
• "Friends, eh? I play well with others."
• "What's in the back room?"
• Swallow the pills and say, "Let's hit that back room, guys."
• "My shirt should say 'Boy' on it."
• "Fuck me right here, daddy, right now."
• "I've got something interesting in mind."
• "I'm actually not sure. I'm open to suggestions."
• Give the bar another shot.
• "No, that's okay dude, I'm gonna head back into the bar."

So, that's all i've got thus far. I've still just barely started the spa though. I haven't had that much time lately to work on building the Twine game version. Feel free to put "Done" or something like that after each one of the links once you've continued the storyline. Then i'll know to go and add that in the game. :) SilverS 21:25, 11 December 2017 (UTC)

Better method of contacting you?

Is there a better way of getting in touch with you? Because i've sent emails to the email you have listed in your text story at the endings, but i've never gotten a response. I assume it's not an email you use all that much. SilverS 00:25, 22 January 2018 (UTC)