"You might need some work on it." - Edward

From Create Your Own Story

"Really huh? I need to work on it?" asks Flynn as he crosses his arms.

"It wasn't bad," Edward replied, "But it wasn't good either."

Flynn nodded slightly with the squint in his eyes, "You know it's rude for tip toeing around like that."

"At least it's more polite than what you would've said," Edward remarked back.

Uncle Flynn only tilted his head a little with his lips pushed up a little. His eyes closed as the crevices of his callus face loosened. Giving a more of an agreeing posture in all consideration. With that he spoke back with, "I would've said more rotten things."

"And you decided this the time not to do that?" Edward said.

"I'll swear like a drunken sailor when I'm a drunken sailor," he said as he only smiles through the callus of his aged face, "Which I haven't been for awhile, now that I think about it."

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