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Re: Thanks?

I like the fact you're branching Ty's Story off the options I create. As a writer there's no better feeling. Please keep up the good work! -- Teejay

My first ex-wife [bless her soul... she got called home by Zeus] strongly resembled Monica in looks. So I know exactly how to write about someone like that. Thank you for the compliment. And I'm trying to include a large number of non-erotic branches in the story as well as the sex scenes. -- Teejay

You don't need to apologize. "Bowling ball with limbs" is in my mind a neutral description. If you're a man who happens to like their women round, it turns you on. (Some people do prefer their women obese rather than Kate Moss style.) If you're a man who prefers your women to be tall and skinny, then the mental image of a short, round, dumpy-looking, middle-aged woman does elicit feelings of disgust. I'm glad to hear you will pick up off my non-erotic branches and I look forward to reading your contributions! -- Teejay

Re: Deaths

Hey, no problem. Did you get the paramedics reference? -- AgentVincent

It's a reference to this film: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v1E49H3fDJ8 There's a band called Send More Paramedics, who took their name from the movie. The guy in the new page I added is also from that film. -- AgentVincent