User talk:NeilPower

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Just so you know, nearly all the stories here are presented in the present tense, not the past tense. --Platypus 20:30, 14 August 2007 (EDT)

Would you mind terribly using the present tense so your pages are like the rest of the story? --Platypus 21:04, 15 August 2007 (EDT)

One more time. Please learn the difference between present tense and past tense. And it's "your vaginal muscles", not "you vagina muscles". --Platypus 21:01, 8 October 2009 (PDT)

Try to keep your tenses straight. And try to punctuate your dialogue properly. --Platypus 17:46, 18 July 2012 (UTC)

I'm getting really tired of having to edit every one of these lengthy pages of yours because you can't be bothered with proper English. So either you start learning proper grammar or you add to a story that I'm not as heavily involved with or I start deleting your work. I don't want to have to throw your pages away, but I also don't want stories that I've been working on cluttered with such poor English. --Platypus 01:08, 20 July 2012 (UTC)