Talk:Wait it out

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This page seems very condescending...why offer the option if you don't feel the reader should take it? Maybe you can think of something better than belittling people just because they don't want to automatically jump into bed with their brother's girlfriend. Maybe they want to end up with her in a different way. Her seducing him. Her finding out they are stuck, worrying, and one thing leads to another, and they find themselves on the couch, hot and sweaty and naked, animal lust allowing them to forget, at least for the moment, that she is dating your brother...or maybe she has always harbored secret feelings for the character, and finds herself acting on these feelings. Who knows, maybe she decides to take a shower, and the towel gets caught in the bedroom door as they are talking, and her naked, glistening body is exposed to his roving, feasting eyes. Maybe she blushes, and panics, or maybe she finds she likes his eyes upon her. There are so many possibilities that the reader could want to take it slowly to watch a story unfold that it seems rather backwards to give an option and then force the reader to select what you want, regardless of them picking a different option. Anyways, this is just my view... --Dirty Me 06:03, 3 April 2014 (UTC)

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