Review: An Epic Adventure
From Create Your Own Story
Title: An Epic Adventure
Author: Forsak3n1
Pages: 61
Preview: Second Entry~~ Well, I walked south and it looks like theres some Jamaicans on a remote island. Maybe they can help me. But those retarded guys need a password before I can get on the island. DANG IT! Man, this bites. I walked along the coast for a bit and to my luck, a village full of natives! Awesome. Perhaps they can help?
Review: An Epic Adventure is what this story is called, and one thing's for sure, it definitely is! The story is very cheerful and extremely random at times (Your name is 'Guy', and you have to find a man named 'Dude'), but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. You receive quests and you even have a questlog, which you often write in regularly, and when I mean regularly, I mean every 2 pages, I like how it feels like a real quest, but it would be nice if the logs are less frequent.
I did find some grammar errors like words missing from sentences, but that did not directly affect my fun in the story.
The story is sadly not finished yet, which is pretty unlucky, since it would have been nice to finish off a quest and receive new ones from quest givers.
Overall, the story fits the vibe of 'choose your own adventure' extremely well, and the story is very entertaining. Though, the story is still yet to be finished, and not even one quest is completed yet. Hopefully, this adventure will soon be completed.
