Talk:Turns Off Pain

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Revision as of 16:30, 28 January 2008 by CelestinaStar (Talk | contribs)
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...I kinda want to write Em's POV of this.

Really good. Ow, Khish. Feel bad for him. -Lynne

  • I like this story. Something about the tenses keeps bugging me, though. It bounces around a bit. O_< Otherwise, I think it's neat.

~ CelestinaStar

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