Talk:Turns Off Pain
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Really good. <I>Ow</I>, Khish. Feel bad for him. | Really good. <I>Ow</I>, Khish. Feel bad for him. | ||
-Lynne | -Lynne | ||
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| + | * I like this story. Something about the tenses keeps bugging me, though. It bounces around a bit. O_< Otherwise, I think it's neat. | ||
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Current revision as of 16:30, 28 January 2008
...I kinda want to write Em's POV of this.
Really good. Ow, Khish. Feel bad for him.
-Lynne
- I like this story. Something about the tenses keeps bugging me, though. It bounces around a bit. O_< Otherwise, I think it's neat.
