Check to see if she's alright

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You lift a jet-black paw to your nose, and take a deep sniff. Oh know, this was blood!  
You lift a jet-black paw to your nose, and take a deep sniff. Oh know, this was blood!  
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Startled, you push past your siblings, and race to your mother's side. Blood, sticky and wet, was pouring out from many wounds into your mother's pelt.
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Startled, you push past your siblings, and race to your mother's side. Blood, sticky and wet, is pouring out from many wounds in your mother's pelt.
"No, please, wake up!"  
"No, please, wake up!"  
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You cry this out, desperate in hope that your mother would awaken. But, she did not move. You nudge her quite hard with your nose, but the shape remains still. You...
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You cry this out, desperate in hope that your mother will awaken. Bu, she does not move. You nudge her quite hard with your nose, but the shape remains still. You...

Revision as of 18:49, 11 May 2008

You move closer to your mother's body. A strange scent hits you like a cold, hard wind. It reeked as if you had found rotten prey, but it had a fresh tang to it, as if the smell was quite recent. You move closer, and you feel something splash around your paws, staining them red.

Red? Why red?

You lift a jet-black paw to your nose, and take a deep sniff. Oh know, this was blood!

Startled, you push past your siblings, and race to your mother's side. Blood, sticky and wet, is pouring out from many wounds in your mother's pelt.

"No, please, wake up!"

You cry this out, desperate in hope that your mother will awaken. Bu, she does not move. You nudge her quite hard with your nose, but the shape remains still. You...


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