Story:Bassium/1st story
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*Short Descripition: Dirk & Jimmy meet a strange stranger | *Short Descripition: Dirk & Jimmy meet a strange stranger | ||
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| + | ===A little help=== | ||
| + | Dirk and Jimmy are just little country kids that love to go on adventures. Dirk speaks in <font color=purple>Purple</font> and Jimmy speaks in <font color=green>Green</font>, there Mother speaks in <font color=marzipan>Blue</font> and there Dad speaks in <font color=orange>Orange</font> Regular people speak in Bollded black letters. | ||
===Chapter 1=== | ===Chapter 1=== | ||
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| + | As Dirk walked out of his house his little brother Jimmy, <font color=green>"Hello brother, may I go on a walk with you?"</font> Said Jimmy. <font color=purple>"Fine whatever brother, you may but if something happenes, don't tell mom. Ok?"</font> Said Dirk, <font color=green>"Yes brother."</font> Said Jimmy. They started on there walk and they walked, and walked, and walked. Until they reached a forest of great amount, <font color=green>"Brother why hast thou taken us to the forest?"</font> Said Jimmy, <font color=purple>"Because brother, the forest is a great place to meet people."</font> Said Dirk. Just as Dirk said what he did an enormus diesel truck pulled up, a man of 7.2 height stepped out smiling revealing his yellow teeth. '''"Say children might one of you want to come with me? If so there is no room in the front so you will have to sit in the back."''' Said Lenny. <font color=purple>"Why yes sir I might like to go for a drive."</font> Said Dirk, Dirk started for the back of the truck right when Jimmy said <font color=green>"But brother this man scares me, please might we go back to the house? Please Dirk!"</font> <font color=purple>"No! You might but I am going,"</font> Dirk turned to the driver, <font color=purple>"Please excuse my brother he is quite dumb."</font> Said Dirk as he got on the back. As they drove off Jimmy ran back to the house to fetch his Mother. | ||
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| + | As Jimmy neared his house he heard tires screeching and he hoped he wouldn't be to late to save his brother Dirk, he finaly made it inside the house and he said <font color=green>"Mommy Dirk and a man by the name of Lenny took Dirk and they drove off. Then I came to get you."</font> | ||
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| + | ==Author's Note== | ||
| + | Now for some tips on the storyline so if you people want you can add more too! Now then Lenny is a bad guy, so he will be the enemy in this story. He is strange meaning he is not among the living! (Booga booga!) So he is a zombie who can think and stuff... Anyways There is a reason for Dirk getting on the truck I just don't want to say why, partly because I myself don't know... | ||
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- Author : Spincer
- Status : In Progress
- Published: 03/13/06
- Rating : PG
- Short Descripition: Dirk & Jimmy meet a strange stranger
Contents |
A little help
Dirk and Jimmy are just little country kids that love to go on adventures. Dirk speaks in Purple and Jimmy speaks in Green, there Mother speaks in Blue and there Dad speaks in Orange Regular people speak in Bollded black letters.
Chapter 1
ONCE UPON
As Dirk walked out of his house his little brother Jimmy, "Hello brother, may I go on a walk with you?" Said Jimmy. "Fine whatever brother, you may but if something happenes, don't tell mom. Ok?" Said Dirk, "Yes brother." Said Jimmy. They started on there walk and they walked, and walked, and walked. Until they reached a forest of great amount, "Brother why hast thou taken us to the forest?" Said Jimmy, "Because brother, the forest is a great place to meet people." Said Dirk. Just as Dirk said what he did an enormus diesel truck pulled up, a man of 7.2 height stepped out smiling revealing his yellow teeth. "Say children might one of you want to come with me? If so there is no room in the front so you will have to sit in the back." Said Lenny. "Why yes sir I might like to go for a drive." Said Dirk, Dirk started for the back of the truck right when Jimmy said "But brother this man scares me, please might we go back to the house? Please Dirk!" "No! You might but I am going," Dirk turned to the driver, "Please excuse my brother he is quite dumb." Said Dirk as he got on the back. As they drove off Jimmy ran back to the house to fetch his Mother.
As Jimmy neared his house he heard tires screeching and he hoped he wouldn't be to late to save his brother Dirk, he finaly made it inside the house and he said "Mommy Dirk and a man by the name of Lenny took Dirk and they drove off. Then I came to get you."
Author's Note
Now for some tips on the storyline so if you people want you can add more too! Now then Lenny is a bad guy, so he will be the enemy in this story. He is strange meaning he is not among the living! (Booga booga!) So he is a zombie who can think and stuff... Anyways There is a reason for Dirk getting on the truck I just don't want to say why, partly because I myself don't know...
