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==Chapter 1==
==Chapter 1==
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Hi my name is [[unusual juxtapositions|Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way]] and I have long [[redundancy|ebony black]] hair (that’s how I got my name) with purple streaks and [[odd sentence construction|red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears]] [[change of subject mid-sentence|and a lot of people tell me I look like]] [[chronology|Amy Lee]] (AN: if u don’t know who she is get da hell out of here!). I’m not related to [[chronology|Gerard Way]] but I wish I was because he’s a major [[profanity|fucking]] hottie. I’m a [[contradictions|vampire but my teeth are straight and white.]] I have pale white skin. I’m also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I’m in the seventh year (I’m seventeen). I’m a goth (in case you couldn’t tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a [[clothing descriptions|black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow.]] I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was [[contradictions|snowing and raining]] so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.
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Hi my name is [[unusual juxtapositions|Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way]] and I have long [[redundancy|ebony black]] hair (that’s how I got my name) with purple streaks and [[odd sentence construction|red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears]] [[change of subject mid-sentence|and a lot of people tell me I look like]] [[chronology|Amy Lee]] (AN: if u don’t know who she is get da hell out of here!). I’m not related to [[chronology|Gerard Way]] but I wish I was because he’s a major [[profanity|fucking]] hottie. I’m a [[contradictions|vampire but my teeth are straight and white.]] I have pale white skin. I’m also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in [[geography|England]] where I’m in the seventh year (I’m seventeen). I’m a goth (in case you couldn’t tell) and I wear mostly black. I love [[geography|Hot Topic]] and I [[muggles|buy all my clothes from there]]. For example today I was wearing a [[clothing descriptions|black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow.]] I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was [[contradictions|snowing and raining]] so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.
“Hey Ebony!” shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy!
“Hey Ebony!” shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy!
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My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u!) [[wrong word order|woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair]] [[odd sentence construction|with pink streaks]] and [[odd sentence construction|opened her forest-green eyes]].* She put on her [[clothing descriptions|Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)]]
My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u!) [[wrong word order|woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair]] [[odd sentence construction|with pink streaks]] and [[odd sentence construction|opened her forest-green eyes]].* She put on her [[clothing descriptions|Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)]]
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“OMFG, I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!” she said excitedly.
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“[[unusual juxtapositions|OMFG]], I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!” she said excitedly.
“Yeah? So?” I said, blushing.
“Yeah? So?” I said, blushing.
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“Do you like Draco?” she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room and into the Great Hall.
“Do you like Draco?” she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room and into the Great Hall.
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“No I so fucking don’t!” I shouted.
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“No I so [[profanity|fucking]] don’t!” I shouted.
“Yeah right!” she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me.
“Yeah right!” she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me.
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“Hi.” he said.
“Hi.” he said.
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“Hi.” I replied flirtily.
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“Hi.” I replied [[neologisms|flirtily]].
“Guess what.” he said.
“Guess what.” he said.
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“What?” I asked.
“What?” I asked.
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“Well, Good Charlotte are having a concert in Hogsmeade.” he told me.
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“Well, [[chronology|Good Charlotte]] are having a concert in [[muggles|Hogsmeade]].” he told me.
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“Oh. My. Fucking. God!” I screamed. I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR.
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“Oh. My. [[profanity|Fucking.]] God!” I screamed. I love [[idosyncrasy|GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR.]]
“Well…. do you want to go with me?” he asked.
“Well…. do you want to go with me?” he asked.
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* She grinned and flipped her hair before opening her eyes.
* She grinned and flipped her hair before opening her eyes.
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==Chapter 3==

Revision as of 22:16, 25 August 2007

Chapter 1

Hi my name is Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that’s how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don’t know who she is get da hell out of here!). I’m not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he’s a major fucking hottie. I’m a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I’m also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I’m in the seventh year (I’m seventeen). I’m a goth (in case you couldn’t tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.

“Hey Ebony!” shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy!

“What’s up Draco?” I asked.

“Nothing.” he said shyly.

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

Chapter 2

The next day I woke up in my bedroom. It was snowing and raining again. I opened the door of my coffin and drank some blood from a bottle I had. My coffin was black ebony and inside it was hot pink velvet with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took of my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pajamas. Instead, I put on a black leather dress, a pentagram necklace, combat boots and black fishnets on. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, and put my hair in a kind of messy bun.

My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u!) woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and opened her forest-green eyes.* She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)

OMFG, I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!” she said excitedly.

“Yeah? So?” I said, blushing.

“Do you like Draco?” she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room and into the Great Hall.

“No I so fucking don’t!” I shouted.

“Yeah right!” she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me.

“Hi.” he said.

“Hi.” I replied flirtily.

“Guess what.” he said.

“What?” I asked.

“Well, Good Charlotte are having a concert in Hogsmeade.” he told me.

“Oh. My. Fucking. God!” I screamed. I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR.

“Well…. do you want to go with me?” he asked.

I gasped.

  • She grinned and flipped her hair before opening her eyes.

Chapter 3

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