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==Chapter 1==
==Chapter 1==
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Hi my name is [[unusual juxtapositions|Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way]] and I have long [[redundancy|ebony black]] hair (that’s how I got my name) with purple streaks and [[odd sentence construction|red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears]] [[change of subject mid-sentence|and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee]] (AN: if u don’t know who she is get da hell out of here!). I’m not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he’s a major fucking hottie. I’m a [[contradictions|vampire but my teeth are straight and white.]] I have pale white skin. I’m also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I’m in the seventh year (I’m seventeen). I’m a goth (in case you couldn’t tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a [[clothing descriptions|black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow.]] I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was [[contradictions|snowing and raining]] so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.
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Hi my name is [[unusual juxtapositions|Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way]] and I have long [[redundancy|ebony black]] hair (that’s how I got my name) with purple streaks and [[odd sentence construction|red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears]] [[change of subject mid-sentence|and a lot of people tell me I look like]] [[chronology|Amy Lee]] (AN: if u don’t know who she is get da hell out of here!). I’m not related to [[chronology|Gerard Way]] but I wish I was because he’s a major [[profanity|fucking]] hottie. I’m a [[contradictions|vampire but my teeth are straight and white.]] I have pale white skin. I’m also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I’m in the seventh year (I’m seventeen). I’m a goth (in case you couldn’t tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a [[clothing descriptions|black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow.]] I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was [[contradictions|snowing and raining]] so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.
“Hey Ebony!” shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy!
“Hey Ebony!” shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy!
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==Chapter 2==
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The next day I woke up in my bedroom. It was [[contradictions|snowing and raining]] again. I opened the door of my coffin and drank some blood from a bottle I had. My coffin was [[redundancy|black ebony]] and inside it was hot pink velvet with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took of my [[clothing descriptions|giant MCR t-shirt]] which I used for pajamas. [[unusual juxtapositions|Instead,]] I put on a [[clothing descriptions|black leather dress, a pentagram necklace, combat boots and black fishnets on. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, and put my hair in a kind of messy bun.]]
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The next day I woke up in my bedroom. It was [[contradictions|snowing and raining]] again. I opened the door of my coffin and drank some blood from a bottle I had. My coffin was [[redundancy|black ebony]] and inside it was hot pink velvet with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took of my giant [[chronology|MCR]] [[clothing descriptions|t-shirt]] which I used for pajamas. [[unusual juxtapositions|Instead,]] I put on a [[clothing descriptions|black leather dress, a pentagram necklace, combat boots and black fishnets on. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, and put my hair in a kind of messy bun.]]
My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u!) [[wrong word order|woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair]] [[odd sentence construction|with pink streaks]] and [[odd sentence construction|opened her forest-green eyes]].* She put on her [[clothing descriptions|Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)]]
My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u!) [[wrong word order|woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair]] [[odd sentence construction|with pink streaks]] and [[odd sentence construction|opened her forest-green eyes]].* She put on her [[clothing descriptions|Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)]]

Revision as of 22:06, 25 August 2007

Chapter 1

Hi my name is Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that’s how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don’t know who she is get da hell out of here!). I’m not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he’s a major fucking hottie. I’m a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I’m also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I’m in the seventh year (I’m seventeen). I’m a goth (in case you couldn’t tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.

“Hey Ebony!” shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy!

“What’s up Draco?” I asked.

“Nothing.” he said shyly.

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

Chapter 2

The next day I woke up in my bedroom. It was snowing and raining again. I opened the door of my coffin and drank some blood from a bottle I had. My coffin was black ebony and inside it was hot pink velvet with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took of my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pajamas. Instead, I put on a black leather dress, a pentagram necklace, combat boots and black fishnets on. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, and put my hair in a kind of messy bun.

My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u!) woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and opened her forest-green eyes.* She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)

“OMFG, I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!” she said excitedly.

“Yeah? So?” I said, blushing.

“Do you like Draco?” she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room and into the Great Hall.

“No I so fucking don’t!” I shouted.

“Yeah right!” she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me.

“Hi.” he said.

“Hi.” I replied flirtily.

“Guess what.” he said.

“What?” I asked.

“Well, Good Charlotte are having a concert in Hogsmeade.” he told me.

“Oh. My. Fucking. God!” I screamed. I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR.

“Well…. do you want to go with me?” he asked.

I gasped.

  • She grinned and flipped her hair before opening her eyes.
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