Talk:Dylan/Hallie Break-up

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Why do we break up? We need a reason. Possibilities:

Aimee
Kati
Nick
Alex (wait, no)
Massive guilt
College

or he could hit you...like in "Closer"

which is a joke, by the way.

Nick. And Aimee. I think it should be a combination. I think you should approach him about Nick and then he mentions me.

But like, obliquely.

I like that 'what a bastard' is part of the screenplay

Also I was going to finish this but your version is better because I am incapable of writing emotionless bastards.

Also, also, some of this is heartbreaking. Some of it is slightly over-the-top.

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