Hallie's Cheating
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Medium interior shot from the front of the car. The door shuts. Hallie has a faint smile on her face.<br> | Medium interior shot from the front of the car. The door shuts. Hallie has a faint smile on her face.<br> | ||
Slightly farther interior shot from the back of the car, behind Hallie and Nick. Nick gets into the car and slams the door. (As soon as he slams the door, "Mr. Brightside" by The Killers starts to play on the soundtrack.)<br> | Slightly farther interior shot from the back of the car, behind Hallie and Nick. Nick gets into the car and slams the door. (As soon as he slams the door, "Mr. Brightside" by The Killers starts to play on the soundtrack.)<br> | ||
| + | The car starts up. (this roughly corresponds with "coming out of my cage") <br> | ||
Tracking shot. The back of the car. <br> | Tracking shot. The back of the car. <br> | ||
| - | Tracking shot. The side of the car. <br> | + | Tracking shot. The side of the car. ("and I've been doing just fine") <br> |
| - | + | Tracking shot. The back of the car. ("gotta, gotta be down, because I want it all")<br> | |
| + | Close shot. Interior of the car. I'm not exactly sure about how this shot is going to be, but I know I want it to be interior and focusing on Hallie and Nick in some way. ("it started out with a kiss, how did it end up like this, it was only a kiss, it was only a kiss")<br> | ||
<br> I think I want to split this into two parts. SO I WILL. | <br> I think I want to split this into two parts. SO I WILL. | ||
Revision as of 05:48, 25 May 2007
This takes place in Rackham.
Okay. So here's how I envision it, feel free to totally tear it apart if you want; this is merely one idea for the plot. Right?
So Hallie and Nick are in a compromising position at the party and they've left.
EXT. House. Night.
Establishing shot of the house.
POV shot of Hallie and Nick. They are on foot and slightly drunk, getting out of the door. The noise of the party is quite loud, but they themselves are quiet. It is as if they are sharing a private joke. Crickets chirp.
Tracking shot. Hallie and Nick walking to the car.
Medium shot. Hallie and Nick from the front, close together.
Do you think anybody saw?
I don't think they'll miss us.
Close up. Hallie in profile, looking up at Nick. She's smiling.
Yes, but do you think anybody saw?
Medium shot from the front of the car. Hallie and Nick are both trying to open the driver's seat door. Medium shot from the side of the car. Hallie's opened the door.
I can get it.
Are you sure?
Medium shot from inside the car. Hallie is getting into the driver's seat.
I'm not drunk. (She laughs.) I'm not very drunk.
This must all be quite serious, not theatrical at all.
Here, let me adjust the driver's seat.
Over-the-shoulder shot from outside the car. Nick adjusts the seat.
Over-the-shoulder shot from inside the car. We can not quite see Hallie's expression. She and Nick are quite close, as he is adjusting the seat for her.
Over-the-shoulder shot from behind Nick as he reaches across Hallie to adjust the rearview mirror. There is a brief moment of tension. We see his profile.
Medium interior shot from the front of the car. The door shuts. Hallie has a faint smile on her face.
Slightly farther interior shot from the back of the car, behind Hallie and Nick. Nick gets into the car and slams the door. (As soon as he slams the door, "Mr. Brightside" by The Killers starts to play on the soundtrack.)
The car starts up. (this roughly corresponds with "coming out of my cage")
Tracking shot. The back of the car.
Tracking shot. The side of the car. ("and I've been doing just fine")
Tracking shot. The back of the car. ("gotta, gotta be down, because I want it all")
Close shot. Interior of the car. I'm not exactly sure about how this shot is going to be, but I know I want it to be interior and focusing on Hallie and Nick in some way. ("it started out with a kiss, how did it end up like this, it was only a kiss, it was only a kiss")
I think I want to split this into two parts. SO I WILL.
