Hallie's Cheating
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| + | Okay. So here's how I envision it, feel free to totally tear it apart if you want; this is merely one idea for the plot. Right?<br> So Hallie and Nick are in a compromising position at the party and they've left. We have them in a car or perhaps walking on foot (I would like to have them in a car but neither of them can drive, so faking would basically suck) and they go to Rackham from one of those nice houses near Community, you know? and perhaps there can be a continuity with the swing-set scene, because maybe they have a friend who lives near there, so they're on the swings...anyway. <br>So they go to Rackham, taking care to avoid the carcass of the Frieze building because that would just be too fucking poignant...<br>and like maybe we can have a super long establishing shot from, like the fountain or something because it's just GORGEOUS over there. or whatever.<br>But anyway they're at Rackham, and honestly I think Dylan should have had some sort of dialogue (unsatisfying of course) with Hallie, or perhaps Nick...saying that he wasn't going to be there, because he had "things to do" you know? with Aimee probably, like fishing? I like fishing) | ||
Revision as of 18:06, 24 May 2007
This takes place in Rackham.
Okay. So here's how I envision it, feel free to totally tear it apart if you want; this is merely one idea for the plot. Right?
So Hallie and Nick are in a compromising position at the party and they've left. We have them in a car or perhaps walking on foot (I would like to have them in a car but neither of them can drive, so faking would basically suck) and they go to Rackham from one of those nice houses near Community, you know? and perhaps there can be a continuity with the swing-set scene, because maybe they have a friend who lives near there, so they're on the swings...anyway.
So they go to Rackham, taking care to avoid the carcass of the Frieze building because that would just be too fucking poignant...
and like maybe we can have a super long establishing shot from, like the fountain or something because it's just GORGEOUS over there. or whatever.
But anyway they're at Rackham, and honestly I think Dylan should have had some sort of dialogue (unsatisfying of course) with Hallie, or perhaps Nick...saying that he wasn't going to be there, because he had "things to do" you know? with Aimee probably, like fishing? I like fishing)
