Swingset Scene
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Also, the last line should be Hallie (in an embarrassed undertone) asking Nick if he wants to do something, but Nick has to go to the Chekhov play. | Also, the last line should be Hallie (in an embarrassed undertone) asking Nick if he wants to do something, but Nick has to go to the Chekhov play. | ||
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| + | EXT. Sidewalk. Day.<br>Hallie, Nick, and [[Jack]] are standing on the sidewalk in front of a house nearby Community. | ||
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| + | <center>JACK | ||
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| + | It was great seeing you. Sorry I have to run. | ||
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| + | NICK | ||
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| + | It was nice to see you, too. | ||
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| + | HALLIE | ||
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| + | Definitely. And I'll be sure to relay your invitation to Tobias.<center> | ||
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| + | Tracking shot of Nick and Hallie leaving the house. Jack stands out in front, waving good-bye. | ||
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| + | Close up of Hallie. | ||
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| + | <center>HALLIE | ||
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| + | I really don't want to go home.</center> | ||
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| + | Close up of Nick. | ||
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| + | <center>NICK | ||
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| + | You think she'll be mad?</center> | ||
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| + | Close up of Hallie. | ||
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| + | <center>HALLIE | ||
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| + | Yes.</center> | ||
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| + | Tracking shot of Nick and Hallie. | ||
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'''Next: [[Chekhov Play]]''' | '''Next: [[Chekhov Play]]''' | ||
Revision as of 01:59, 30 May 2007
In this scene, Nick pushes Hallie on the swings in front of Community, and then stops, standing in front as the swing stops moving. Their faces end up quite close when Dylan and Aimee come out from around a corner and call out to them.
I think we should establish that Nick and Hallie are at the house of a mutual friend (who will later throw the party) and who lives near Community (and Rackham!). Then they go to the swing set.
Also, the last line should be Hallie (in an embarrassed undertone) asking Nick if he wants to do something, but Nick has to go to the Chekhov play.
EXT. Sidewalk. Day.
Hallie, Nick, and Jack are standing on the sidewalk in front of a house nearby Community.
It was great seeing you. Sorry I have to run.
NICK
It was nice to see you, too.
HALLIE
Definitely. And I'll be sure to relay your invitation to Tobias.<center>
Tracking shot of Nick and Hallie leaving the house. Jack stands out in front, waving good-bye.
Close up of Hallie.
<center>HALLIE
I really don't want to go home.Close up of Nick.
Close up of Hallie.
Tracking shot of Nick and Hallie.
