Confrontation

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<center>AIMEE<br>Yeah, I wasn't in. (Pause.) What's wrong?</center><br>
<center>AIMEE<br>Yeah, I wasn't in. (Pause.) What's wrong?</center><br>
<center>DYLAN<br>Everything. (Long pause. He looks embarrassed.) Pardon the melodrama. </center><br>
<center>DYLAN<br>Everything. (Long pause. He looks embarrassed.) Pardon the melodrama. </center><br>
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<center>AIMEE<br>Look, do you want some tea? You look like you've been drugged and forced to have a colonoscopy. </center><br>
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<center>AIMEE<br>Do you want some tea? You look like you've been drugged and forced to have a colonoscopy. </center><br>
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<center>DYLAN<br>That's not far from what happened.</center><br>
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<center>DYLAN<br>Good guess.</center><br>
<center>AIMEE<br>I'm an excellent judge of character</center><br>
<center>AIMEE<br>I'm an excellent judge of character</center><br>
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She unlatches the door.
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She unlatches the door.<br>
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Medium tracking shot. They walk into a sort of kitchenette thingy. Aimee makes tea in the microwave. While she is occupied with that, Dylan looks around and sees that Alex is sleeping on the couch, a few feet away. Aimee hands him his tea

Revision as of 17:20, 28 May 2007

I sort of think this would be better after Dinner Sincerity, but you tell me. In this scene, Dylan confronts Aimee about Alex. Alex has been attempting (unsuccessfully) to take a cell-phone picture of Aimee. Dylan has just discovered the sinister bet and is trying to explain it to Aimee, who refuses to listen because of her feelings towards Alex.
INT. Apartment building. Day.
Far shot. DYLAN, from behind, at the door of AIMEE's apartment. (Aimee and Kati have adjacent apartments? I'd like to discuss this.)

Close shot. The door opens a crack. We see AIMEE. She looks slightly tired and disheveled. The chain is still in the door throughout the following.

AIMEE
What?

DYLAN
I tried to reach you last night.

AIMEE
Yeah, I wasn't in. (Pause.) What's wrong?

DYLAN
Everything. (Long pause. He looks embarrassed.) Pardon the melodrama.

AIMEE
Do you want some tea? You look like you've been drugged and forced to have a colonoscopy.

DYLAN
Good guess.

AIMEE
I'm an excellent judge of character

She unlatches the door.
Medium tracking shot. They walk into a sort of kitchenette thingy. Aimee makes tea in the microwave. While she is occupied with that, Dylan looks around and sees that Alex is sleeping on the couch, a few feet away. Aimee hands him his tea

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