Swingset Scene
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Also we should maybe have some Dylan/Aimee stuff interspersed, if they're going to be doing something as well. | Also we should maybe have some Dylan/Aimee stuff interspersed, if they're going to be doing something as well. | ||
| - | <br> and I think the last piece of dialogue in this scene should be something like, "And have you seen Alex (Greg)? He's been acting pretty weird..." | + | <br> and I think the last piece of dialogue in this scene should be something like, "And have you seen Alex (Greg)? He's been acting pretty weird..." and we cut to the photomontage of seduction, |
Revision as of 12:32, 25 May 2007
In this scene, Nick pushes Hallie on the swings in front of Community, and then stops, standing in front as the swing stops moving. Their faces end up quite close when Dylan and Aimee come out from around a corner and call out to them.
I think we should establish that Nick and Hallie are at the house of a mutual friend (who will later throw the party) and who lives near Community (and Rackham!). Then they go to the swing set.
Also, if Nick is going to go to a Chekhov play he should mention it for continuity.
Also we should maybe have some Dylan/Aimee stuff interspersed, if they're going to be doing something as well.
and I think the last piece of dialogue in this scene should be something like, "And have you seen Alex (Greg)? He's been acting pretty weird..." and we cut to the photomontage of seduction,
