Talk:Dylan/Hallie Break-up

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	Why do we break up?  We need a reason.  Possibilities:		Why do we break up?  We need a reason.  Possibilities:
-	Aimee	+	Aimee<br>
-	Kati	+	Kati<br>
-	Nick	+	Nick<br>
-	Alex (wait, no)	+	Alex (wait, no)<br>
-	Massive guilt	+	Massive guilt<br>
-	College	+	College<br>
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		+	== or he could hit you...like in "Closer" ==
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		+	which is a joke, by the way.
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		+	Nick. And Aimee. I think it should be a combination. I think you should approach him about Nick and then he mentions me.
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		+	But like, obliquely.
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		+	==I like that 'what a bastard' is part of the screenplay==
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		+	Also I was going to finish this but your version is better because I am incapable of writing emotionless bastards.
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		+	Also, also, some of this is heartbreaking. Some of it is slightly over-the-top.

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Current revision as of 03:29, 31 May 2007

Why do we break up? We need a reason. Possibilities:

Aimee
Kati
Nick
Alex (wait, no)
Massive guilt
College

or he could hit you...like in "Closer"

which is a joke, by the way.

Nick. And Aimee. I think it should be a combination. I think you should approach him about Nick and then he mentions me.

But like, obliquely.

I like that 'what a bastard' is part of the screenplay

Also I was going to finish this but your version is better because I am incapable of writing emotionless bastards.

Also, also, some of this is heartbreaking. Some of it is slightly over-the-top.