Alex/Hallie Seduction
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They are playing chess. Hallie gets up for a moment and Alex switches the position of some of the pieces while she's not looking. When she kisses him, they both start getting somewhat more into it than anticipated. He caps the photo while they have their eyes closed. This is almost unimportant, as the most important aspect of it is that Hallie gets quite disturbed--not only by Alex's behavior, but by her own willingness to betray Dylan. | They are playing chess. Hallie gets up for a moment and Alex switches the position of some of the pieces while she's not looking. When she kisses him, they both start getting somewhat more into it than anticipated. He caps the photo while they have their eyes closed. This is almost unimportant, as the most important aspect of it is that Hallie gets quite disturbed--not only by Alex's behavior, but by her own willingness to betray Dylan. | ||
<center>HALLIE<br>Stop it. Stop it, that's enough.</center><br> | <center>HALLIE<br>Stop it. Stop it, that's enough.</center><br> | ||
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| + | Here's another draft for the scene, tell me what you think, keep what you like and re-write the rest | ||
| + | Hallie/Alex Seduction | ||
| + | Hallie knocks at Alex’s door, slowly Greg stands up and walks toward the door, doing a sort of impromptu spin as he approaches, and then opening it, | ||
| + | Hallie stands there awkwardly | ||
| + | A: Ah, come in, you’ll find that all the preparations are in place for our game, madame | ||
| + | H: I’m glad, I look forward to a good game. | ||
| + | A: Perhaps you’ll have more than that to look forward to | ||
| + | H: what do you mean? | ||
| + | A: I mean simply you and I might consider a more intimate sort of play after the event. (puts his arm around Hallie) | ||
| + | H: Greg, stop it… (Hallie abruptly jams her elbow into his stomach, Greg releases her, coughing). | ||
| + | A: Well, (cough) to business, would you like some tea? | ||
| + | H: No, thank you. | ||
| + | They sit down at a carefully prepared chess board | ||
| + | A: The first move is your, my dear. | ||
| + | Hallie moves a pawn. | ||
| + | A: Ah, fairly typical, I can see what your thinking already, Livy. | ||
| + | H: Oh, and what’s that? | ||
| + | A: well, I can’t tell you for fear you might alter your strategy. | ||
| + | H: well, at the moment I don’t have a strategy. | ||
| + | A: oh, I’ll bet you do, in fact, I’d be willing to make a little wager on the outcome of this evening’s game. | ||
| + | H: Fine, but if I win, you have to stop hitting on me, I’ll forgo any cash consolation. | ||
| + | A: ah, so the policy of romantic aggression once again yields a monetary reward. Alright, I’ll forgo my payment in trade for something from you? | ||
| + | H: and what’s that, gregory? | ||
| + | A: One kiss from your ruby red lips. | ||
| + | Alex stands up and walks over to hallie’s side of the table, and starts to take her hand, Hallie pushes him back, he stumbles. | ||
| + | H: Sit Down, you haven’t won yet, I accept your wager, by the way. | ||
| + | A: Ah, so I look forward to the pleasure you will offer. | ||
| + | H: Don’t go counting your chickens, you’ll find a few of them have Ascarad Worms | ||
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| + | A little while later, | ||
| + | A: Another victory for the skilled champion | ||
| + | H: You played very well. | ||
| + | A: Yes, and now the time has come for you to yield up to me my reward. | ||
| + | Alex walks over, this time hallie doesn’t force him away… | ||
| + | There’s a pause, and they kiss, briefly, exploratory… and then again for longer, and then again, but Hallie pushes greg off fer | ||
| + | H: stop it, Greg… stop! | ||
| + | H: I’m leaving, | ||
| + | A: Well, take care, mademoiselle, Liv. | ||
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'''Previously: [[Alex and Kati's Bet]]''' | '''Previously: [[Alex and Kati's Bet]]''' | ||
'''Next: [[Invitation]]''' | '''Next: [[Invitation]]''' | ||
Revision as of 04:26, 6 June 2007
This is the first seduction of the film, in which we realize that Kati and Alex are definitely going through with the bet. In this scene, Alex "seduces" Hallie by making a bet with her that if he wins (some game), she'll kiss him. He cheats, and wins, thereby getting his photo.
They are playing chess. Hallie gets up for a moment and Alex switches the position of some of the pieces while she's not looking. When she kisses him, they both start getting somewhat more into it than anticipated. He caps the photo while they have their eyes closed. This is almost unimportant, as the most important aspect of it is that Hallie gets quite disturbed--not only by Alex's behavior, but by her own willingness to betray Dylan.
Stop it. Stop it, that's enough.
Here's another draft for the scene, tell me what you think, keep what you like and re-write the rest Hallie/Alex Seduction Hallie knocks at Alex’s door, slowly Greg stands up and walks toward the door, doing a sort of impromptu spin as he approaches, and then opening it, Hallie stands there awkwardly A: Ah, come in, you’ll find that all the preparations are in place for our game, madame H: I’m glad, I look forward to a good game. A: Perhaps you’ll have more than that to look forward to H: what do you mean? A: I mean simply you and I might consider a more intimate sort of play after the event. (puts his arm around Hallie) H: Greg, stop it… (Hallie abruptly jams her elbow into his stomach, Greg releases her, coughing). A: Well, (cough) to business, would you like some tea? H: No, thank you. They sit down at a carefully prepared chess board A: The first move is your, my dear. Hallie moves a pawn. A: Ah, fairly typical, I can see what your thinking already, Livy. H: Oh, and what’s that? A: well, I can’t tell you for fear you might alter your strategy. H: well, at the moment I don’t have a strategy. A: oh, I’ll bet you do, in fact, I’d be willing to make a little wager on the outcome of this evening’s game. H: Fine, but if I win, you have to stop hitting on me, I’ll forgo any cash consolation. A: ah, so the policy of romantic aggression once again yields a monetary reward. Alright, I’ll forgo my payment in trade for something from you? H: and what’s that, gregory? A: One kiss from your ruby red lips. Alex stands up and walks over to hallie’s side of the table, and starts to take her hand, Hallie pushes him back, he stumbles. H: Sit Down, you haven’t won yet, I accept your wager, by the way. A: Ah, so I look forward to the pleasure you will offer. H: Don’t go counting your chickens, you’ll find a few of them have Ascarad Worms
A little while later, A: Another victory for the skilled champion H: You played very well. A: Yes, and now the time has come for you to yield up to me my reward. Alex walks over, this time hallie doesn’t force him away… There’s a pause, and they kiss, briefly, exploratory… and then again for longer, and then again, but Hallie pushes greg off fer H: stop it, Greg… stop! H: I’m leaving, A: Well, take care, mademoiselle, Liv.
Previously: Alex and Kati's Bet Next: Invitation
