Confrontation

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I sort of think this would be better after [[Dinner Sincerity]], but you tell me. In this scene, [[Dylan]] confronts [[Aimee]] about [[Alex]]. Alex has been attempting (unsuccessfully) to take a cell-phone picture of Aimee. Dylan has just discovered the sinister bet and is trying to explain it to Aimee, who refuses to listen because of her feelings towards Alex.
I sort of think this would be better after [[Dinner Sincerity]], but you tell me. In this scene, [[Dylan]] confronts [[Aimee]] about [[Alex]]. Alex has been attempting (unsuccessfully) to take a cell-phone picture of Aimee. Dylan has just discovered the sinister bet and is trying to explain it to Aimee, who refuses to listen because of her feelings towards Alex.
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HEY GUYS GUYS I DON'T THINK WE NEED THIS SCENE, LET'S DISCUSS.
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INT. Apartment building. Day.<br>
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Far shot. DYLAN, from behind, at the door of AIMEE's apartment. (Aimee and Kati have adjacent apartments? I'd like to discuss this.)<br><br>
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Close shot. The door opens a crack. We see AIMEE. She looks slightly tired and disheveled. The chain is still in the door throughout the following.<br>
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<center>AIMEE<br>What?</center><br>
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<center>DYLAN<br>I tried to reach you last night.</center><br>
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<center>AIMEE<br>Yeah, I wasn't in. (Pause.) What's wrong?</center><br>
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<center>DYLAN<br>Everything. (Long pause. He looks embarrassed.) Pardon the melodrama. </center><br>
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<center>AIMEE<br>Look, do you want some tea? You look like you've been drugged and forced to have a colonoscopy. </center><br>
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<center>DYLAN<br>That's not far from what happened.</center><br>
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<center>AIMEE<br>I'm an excellent judge of character</center><br>
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She unlatches the door.

Revision as of 17:12, 28 May 2007

I sort of think this would be better after Dinner Sincerity, but you tell me. In this scene, Dylan confronts Aimee about Alex. Alex has been attempting (unsuccessfully) to take a cell-phone picture of Aimee. Dylan has just discovered the sinister bet and is trying to explain it to Aimee, who refuses to listen because of her feelings towards Alex.
INT. Apartment building. Day.
Far shot. DYLAN, from behind, at the door of AIMEE's apartment. (Aimee and Kati have adjacent apartments? I'd like to discuss this.)

Close shot. The door opens a crack. We see AIMEE. She looks slightly tired and disheveled. The chain is still in the door throughout the following.

AIMEE
What?

DYLAN
I tried to reach you last night.

AIMEE
Yeah, I wasn't in. (Pause.) What's wrong?

DYLAN
Everything. (Long pause. He looks embarrassed.) Pardon the melodrama.

AIMEE
Look, do you want some tea? You look like you've been drugged and forced to have a colonoscopy.

DYLAN
That's not far from what happened.

AIMEE
I'm an excellent judge of character

She unlatches the door.

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