Editing Stay and try to communicate with the beasts

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You decide that staying and finding out what these... things can tell you. As you stumble closer to the creatures voices you hear giggles of a weird voice.you ask "who's there"
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You decide that staying and finding out what these...ts can tell you. As you stumble closer to the creatures voices you hear giggles of a weird voice.you ask "who's there"
  the reply echos "we are,brother"
  the reply echos "we are,brother"
"Who is we?"
"Who is we?"
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"I'm sorry I just..." you suddenly come face to face with a beautiful creature and you begin to feel fluttery inside
"I'm sorry I just..." you suddenly come face to face with a beautiful creature and you begin to feel fluttery inside
She looked you up and down and said "Brother"
She looked you up and down and said "Brother"
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"I don't understand...." you replied trying to stay calm.
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"I dont understand...." you replyed trying to stay calm

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