Editing Interrogate her harshly

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"Where am I?" You yell rudely. "I want answers! ANSWERS! Is this some kind of deranged prank? Tell me now!" You continue shouting, feeling as if you've gone over the brink of insanity. She responds by giving you a rather hard and sobering slap to the face.
"Where am I?" You yell rudely. "I want answers! ANSWERS! Is this some kind of deranged prank? Tell me now!" You continue shouting, feeling as if you've gone over the brink of insanity. She responds by giving you a rather hard and sobering slap to the face.
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"That was very rude and uncalled for." The mysterious woman says. "In fact, show's over, we can do better."
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"That was very rude and uncalled for." The mysterious girl says. "In fact, shows over. We can do better."
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Before you can protest, you hear her yell "next" and you find yourself suddenly hurled east towards the ocean over land and dunes. As you tumble though the air you hear thousands of voices screaming "'''down-voted!'''" Whatever that means.
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Before you can protest, you hear her yell "next" and you find yourself falling face first into the ocean. A group of sharks proceed to take medium-sized bites out of your body, starting from the lower torso.
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You land with a great splash in the surf and a group of cats yelling nonsensical phrases immediately surrounds you, proceeding to nibble your body, starting from the lower torso.
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You get the sudden, inexplicable feeling that you have just been "downvoted", whatever that means.
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''I guess politeness matters more than I thought...'' You think to yourself as a cat finally nibbles your chest, severing your heart and ending your painful last moments.
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''I guess politeness matters more than I thought...'' You think to yourself as a shark finally bites into your chest, severing your heart and ending your painful last moments.
'''***You have died***'''
'''***You have died***'''
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