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You slowly make your way through the door, opening it cautiously. Once inside, you survey the room and find a fireplace with two wooden chairs facing the fire. A man, if you could call him a man, more of a vague figure of a man, a shadow if you will, is sitting in one of the chairs. He hears you come in, and begins to speak.
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You slowly make your way through the door. Cautiously opening it as it creeks. Once inside you survey the room around you, finding a fireplace illuminating the room, which a couple of chairs facing the fire. A man, if you could call him a man, more of a vague figure of a man, A shadow if you will, was sitting in one of the chairs. He has heard you come in, and begins to speak.
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"Come in. Sit Down." he says in an oddly soothing and welcoming voice. You take a seat in the unoccupied chair. The fire is spindly and dying, but the oddly familiar warmth is a welcome change from the past events of today. After a long period of unsettling silence, the man says "I know you must be confused. I was too, when they first brought me here, but in time the feeling will pass." He recites these words in a peculiar way, almost like he's reading from a script. You get the feeling that you aren't the first visitor that he has spoken those words to.
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"Come in. Sit Down" he says. In a fatherly voice.
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You take a seat in the unoccupied chair. feeling the warmth of the fire in your antennae.
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"I know you must be confused,"the man said, "I was too when they first brought me here, but in time it will pass."
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*[[Ignore the man and stare into the fire.]]
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*[[Say Nothing]]
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*[[Ask the man who he is.]]
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*[[Ask who this man is]]
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*[[Ask "Do you know what has happened to me?"]]
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*[[Say "so you know what is happening? Please, tell me."]]

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