The Power of Time and Words
From Mako Wiki
Characters
§ Eclipse
§ Eclipse's Mother
Storyline
This was actually taken from an event that happened in Makoto's life, however, she changed the names to protect the innocent (and the not-so-innocent).
A daughter's heart is seemingly broken and she looks to her mother for comfort and solace.
Other Notes
No need for revision here. Huzzah~! Not that it's perfect or anything, it's just well-written to the point where there's no need to revise it.
