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He's a pretty cheerful person all of the time and believes that there is good deep down in everyone.  However, he’s not the kind that will tolerate getting walked on.  If he feels threatened or upset, he isn’t afraid to show that the timid kitten is really a lion in disguise. Allen's out to change the world and it doesn't matter if it's through a large of small venue - he'll do it any way he can. He'll bear the burden for anyone and wouldn't even dream of asking for anything in return.  He’s the kind of nice, polite person that would be willing to give you the shirt off of his back if he thought for even a moment that it would help you out in any way.  While he tries not to cut people down, himself, he will let people know when they’ve taken things a step too far.  
He's a pretty cheerful person all of the time and believes that there is good deep down in everyone.  However, he’s not the kind that will tolerate getting walked on.  If he feels threatened or upset, he isn’t afraid to show that the timid kitten is really a lion in disguise. Allen's out to change the world and it doesn't matter if it's through a large of small venue - he'll do it any way he can. He'll bear the burden for anyone and wouldn't even dream of asking for anything in return.  He’s the kind of nice, polite person that would be willing to give you the shirt off of his back if he thought for even a moment that it would help you out in any way.  While he tries not to cut people down, himself, he will let people know when they’ve taken things a step too far.  
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Though his life hasn’t been the easiest, he doesn’t let things get him down.  He puts faith into the belief that if he simply keeps walking that things will be better down the road.  He’ll push himself far beyond his limits for his friends and loved ones without hesitation.  However, one of his major flaws is that he doesn’t think about himself first – he puts others ahead of him.
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<br>Though his life hasn’t been the easiest, he doesn’t let things get him down.  He puts faith into the belief that if he simply keeps walking that things will be better down the road.  He’ll push himself far beyond his limits for his friends and loved ones without hesitation.  However, one of his major flaws is that he doesn’t think about himself first – he puts others ahead of him.
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Allen’s a very private person and tends to hide certain aspects about himself.  He’s also very self conscious about his white hair, though he tries not to let it show.  He still manages to smile as he walks on, but he hides his cards well, refusing to show them to the rest of the world.
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<br>Allen’s a very private person and tends to hide certain aspects about himself.  He’s also very self conscious about his white hair, though he tries not to let it show.  He still manages to smile as he walks on, but he hides his cards well, refusing to show them to the rest of the world.
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He’s still a teenager, after all, and is prone to being reckless and acting without thinking.  He still maintains a certain innocence and even some naivety in wanting to save everyone that he can.  Deep down he knows that he can’t change everything, but he still tries.
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<br>He’s still a teenager, after all, and is prone to being reckless and acting without thinking.  He still maintains a certain innocence and even some naivety in wanting to save everyone that he can.  Deep down he knows that he can’t change everything, but he still tries.
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While he often offers a shoulder to lean on and a caring soul for one to stock their trust in, he isn’t so open, himself.  He closes himself off, letting people in only so far.  Aside from his adopted father, he has given no one his complete trust.  Perhaps this will change over time as he grows closer to people and builds tight-knit bonds.
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<br>While he often offers a shoulder to lean on and a caring soul for one to stock their trust in, he isn’t so open, himself.  He closes himself off, letting people in only so far.  Aside from his adopted father, he has given no one his complete trust.  Perhaps this will change over time as he grows closer to people and builds tight-knit bonds.

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