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==Chapter 1==
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It was a lovely day on the sea. Dolphins were swimming and seagulls were flying. A cruise ship then appeared in the background. Sailors then carried a net of Goldeen.
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Sailors: I'll tell you a tale of the bottomless blue
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And it's hey to the starboard, heave ho
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Look out, a lad, a mermaid be waiting for you
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In mysterious fathoms below
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A fifteen-year-old girl with long red hair, blue eyes, a white vest with a pink zipped sleevedress over it, a black belt around her waist and white shoes was letting the hair blow in her hair. "Ah, isn't this great! The wind blowing through your face, the salty air! Great, isn't it, Jumbaa?" The girl smiled looking at a purple tubby alien with four eyes, a yellow shirt with red leaves on it and blue shorts with a white stripe on it who was throwing up. He looked up to reveal his face was green. "Yeah, graceful!" Jumbaa said sacrastically and sickly. "A strong wind and a lovely sun. King Simba must be in a good mood today!" A muscular nineteen-year-old man with short hair, a white shirt, a green sash, black pants and black shoes named Zolo smiled pulling a rope. "King Simba? Who's he?" The girl asked. "The king of the Pride Land. A land where only animals. I thought all girls knew of the Pride Land!" A well-built seventeen-year-old boy with black hair, a yellow straw hat, a red tank top with yellow buttons, blue shorts and yellow sandals named Luffy smirked putting fish in a net. Jumbaa just rolled his eyes. "Pride Land. Really! Kairi, don't listen to idiots. They got sea for brains!" Jumbaa warned. Luffy got mad at this and picked up a Goldeen without thinking. "But it's true! There is such a thing as animal land! I'm telling you! They live life like the way we do!" Luffy snapped wagging the Goldeen into Jumbaa's face. It then slapped him many times before going back into the water. "Oops." Luffy said embarrassed. Jumbaa glared at Luffy while Zolo rolls his eyes and Kairi giggled. (Note: Just to let everyone know. I just recently become an One Piece fan)
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In another land, all animals shapes and sizes came to a palace room. It was a concert. Then, a blue hornbill bird with an orange beak, orange feet, a blue tail with ablack tip at the end and a white stomach. "Evening, everyone! I am Zazu and today is the concert!" Zazu introuduced as big trumpets played. Everyone cheered at this. "Now, may I present the King Of the Pride Land, King Simba!" Zazu introduced. Everyone cheered as a yellow lion with a red mane walked in. "Now, also here is the conductor, Blooregard Q. Kazoo!" Zazu introduced. Nobody cheered as Kazoos played as a light blue Pacman-ghost-like blob walked in. He came over to Simba. "I hope this concert goes well, Bloo." Simba said a little worried. "Don't worry, your Majesty! This concert will be the best one I ever played! Your sons, daughters, mother and wife will be wonderful!" Bloo smiled. "Uh-huh! Especially my little Sora!" Simba smiled. "Yes, he's got the most awesome voice!" Bloo agreed as he nodded. He walked off to the conductor's stand suddenly grumbling. "If only he showed up for rehearsels once in a while!" Bloo scowled. He then got out a conductor's stick and tapped on it. He then played music. Three flowers appeared and Kovu, Kiara, Vitani, Nuka, Nala and Sarabi came out.
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Lions: We are the family of Simba
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Great father who loves us and named us well
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Kiara
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Kiara: La-la-la-la-la
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Lions: Vitani
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Vitani: La-la-la-la-la
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Lions: Nala
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Nala: La-la-la
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Lions: Sarabi
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Sarabi: La-la-la
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Lions: Kovu
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Kovu: La-la-la
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Lions: Nuka
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Nuka: La-la-la
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Lions: And then there is the youngest in his musical debut
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Our seventh little brother, we're presenting him to you
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To sing a song Bloo wrote, it's like a bora (I know. It sucks but I like to see you find anything better that rhymes with Sora)
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Bloo Sweatdrops and chucles.(DOH! HUGBEES)
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He's our brother, Sor...
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The flower opened up to reveal no one.(DOH! HUGBEES) Everyone gasped in horror. Espeically Bloo. He then saw Simba who looks really angry. He then roared. "SORAAAAAA!"
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Meanwhile, a greyish-brown lion cub with brown spiky hair, blue and green eyes, a silver crown necklace around his neck and a red backpack stopped when he heard something. "You guys hear that?" The cub asked. Then, he realised nobody was following him. "Guys?" The cub asked looking back. "Sora! Wait up!" A voice shouted. "Guys, hurry up!" Sora complained. Then, four figures ran up to him panting. The first one was a white lion cub with long silver hair. The second one is a white beagle with black beady eyes, black ears and a black collar. The third one was a cream-coloured rabbit with brown eyes, an orange dress with a white collar and a blue box tie and orange and yellow shoes. The last one is a light blue creature with a raindrop-shaped head, a yellow dot on its head and a red bow tie. "You know we can run at fast as you!" The white cub complained. "Did you just admit that out loud, Riku?" Sora smirked. "Um... Rats!" Riku scowled. Sora just rolled his eyes. "Anyway, there it is!" Sora said pointing to a temple. "Cool, isn it?" Sora smiled. "Hey, it's very cool, now can we go home?" The rabbit asked trying to run off but Riku grabbed her collar making her run in place. "Come on, Cream, you and Cheese aren't getting cold feet, are you?" Riku smirked. "No, we're not!" Cream snapped as Cheese nodded. The lion cubs and the beagle went to the temple. Cream and Cheese nervously followed. "I mean we want to come in but um, Cheese have a cough." Cream lied. Cheese looked at her funny. "You have a cough." Cream repeated. Cheese then got the idea and coughed. "Yeah, I don't think I should bring Cheese in there." Cream nodded. Sora and Riku then rolled his eyes. "Fine, then, you stay here and look out for nobodies." Riku smirked evilly as he, Sora and the beagle ran inside. "That's right, we'll just stay here and watch out for..." Cream started before she realised what Riku said. "Nobodies? Mr. Sora, Mr. Riku, Mr. Snoopy, wait!" Cream shouted as she and Cheese ran inside. Meanwhile, Sora, Riku and Snoopy were waiting for her. "I still think there is a different way to persuade Cream to come with us! I mean, putting a six-year-old and nobody watch?" Snoopy asked. "Aw, quit being a worry-wart! I bet she is coming right about now!" Riku said. A few seconds later, Sora, Riku and Snoopy then gotton concerned. They walked to the entrance to see Cream stuck in some vines. "Hi, boys!" Cream said sheepishly. Snoopy gave a relieved sigh. "Cream, don't ever scare us like that again!" Snoopy said as they helped Cream out. "Um, guys, do you really think there are nobodies here?" Cream asked scared. Unknown to them, a giant white creature was watching them. "Oh, Cream, quit being a baby!" Riku teased. "I am not!" Cream said unhappily as they continued into the temple. "I don't get scared easily!" Cream snapped. She then walked into a Dry Bones. She and Cheese screamed as they ran and tackled Snoopy. "Cream, Cheese, are you guys okay?" Snoopy asked concerned. "Yes..." Cream said still scared. Then, she saw a light. "Hey, what's that?" Cream asked. Sora went towards the light to see to was a giant gold key. "Wow, have you ever seen anything... so amazing..." Sora said with sparkling eyes. "Yeah..." Snoopy, Cream and Cheese said with sparkling eyes as well. Riku gave all of them a funny look. "Do you guys even know what it is?" Riku asked. "No, but I bet Timmy and the others will!" Sora smiled putting the key in the backpack. Sora went for more items but Cream can't help the feeling they are being watched. "Um, guys, do you hear something?" Cream said scared. "Hey, look, guys, it's another giant key!" Sora smiled. "Yeah, but that one looks a bit..." Snoopy started. "Female-suited?" Riku asked. "Guys, I think we should get out of here!" Cream warned. "Cream, will you chill out? There are..." Riku started. "NOBODY!" Cream gasped as she and Cheese ran off. Sora, Riku and Snoopy saw this and gasp. The Nobody tried to punch at Cream but Snoopy then flew in and saved her. Sora and Riku then pushed a rock between the Nobody and Snoopy, Cream and Cheese. Everyone then ran off. Along the way, Sora dropped his backpack. He then realised what he did and went back to get it. They then ran out of the temple. They were going good until Cheese ran in a tree branch making him fall down dizzily. Sora saw this and quickly ran after Cheese and grabbed him before the Nobody ran headfirst into the tree. It then got stuck in the tree. Riku then ran over to it. "Ha! Take that you freak!" Riku taunted. The Nobody roared in Riku's face. He just blinked for a second and ran off to the others. "Hee hee hee. Mr. Riku, you are such a baby!" Cream teased. (DOH! HUGBEES)"I am not!" Riku said unhappily.
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On a beach where a treehouse is are four figures. The first one is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair, a pink hat, buck teeth, a pink shirt, dark blue pants and blue shoes. The secone one is an eight-year-old boy with a literally square head, short brown hair, a white wool shirt with a red sweater over it, a green backpack, tan pants and black and white shoes. The third one was a nine-year-old Hawaiian girl with long raven hair, a red dress with white leaves on it and black sandals. The last one was a blue koala-like creature with black eyes and a light blue chest. "So how the lookout, Timmy?" The girl asked. "Hmm... it's hard to say, Lilo everything looks so... far." Timmy shrugged looking into a pair of binoculars. "Um, Timmy, you..." The koala started before the big head kid shook his head. "Don't bother, Stitch!" The boy frowned. "What was that, Mac?" Timmy asked. "Nothing, leader!" Mac smiled. Timmy just shrugged and turned his back. Mac then put on an unimpressed look. Then, Timmy saw something. "Whoa, Two lions, a beagle, a rabbit and a chao off the port bow! Sora, how are you doing?" Timmy shouted looking down at Sora and the others who are a mile away. Mac then rolled his eyes, put one finger on the binoculars and pushed it down revealing that they are only ten yards again. In other words, he looked in the wrong side of the binoculars. "Whoa, what a run!" Timmy said impressed. Mac just gave an annoyed sigh and rolled his eyes.
==Chapter 2==
==Chapter 2==

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