The Review/Adult Stories/Life of a 13 year old

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DirtyMeStoryTime's review of Life of a 13 year old:
It is rather hard to call this a story, as opposed to some random humiliation of women. Readers who like women, and do not like to see them used as nothing other than a sex object should avoid this story. Readers that enjoy misogynistic, masochistic, sociopathic sex will enjoy this more.

The story is highly unrealistic, with many of the sex scenes entering the woman's womb by entering her cervix. All of the women featured are supermodels (At least in the writers viewpoint, since many real life supermodels do not have that big of breasts), and all the men are exceptionally well endowed. The story follows the philosophy that "A big dick and a good dicking make all women happy". The author even had one male "Pierce the womb of an elementary school student, cumming into her guts next to her heart". More than once, the characters kill women through their fucking, and sometimes even get away with it.

The one good thing that I had noted was that there was some overlap between the stories from different points of view, so the author/s did try to make an effort to somehow show the same thing from multiple viewpoints.

For the writing of the story, there are many red links and abrupt red link endings. The grammar is poor, with many errors. The punctuation is also poorly used. The story also had many inconsistencies, with main character's daughters ending up suddenly with different names, or other characters changing names in the next page. There is no plotline, it is basically just one rape/molestation/sex scene after another.

Overall, I do not recommend this story. I feel there are much better sex stories on this site. However, if you are looking for nothing but a masturbation story that turns women into nothing but cum dumpsters, then you might enjoy it.