Talk:Time Vortex/Throw it in the bin
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Revision as of 18:28, 19 October 2009 by NightChime (Talk | contribs)
The ending here isn't very clear. Does the character hate himself now? Did he actually physically change? Has the watch put itself on his wrist? (Though that would make even less sense, because then it wouldn't be a dead end.) I guess it doesn't matter horribly, but the writing's good enough I'm at least a little surprised for it to be so ambiguous. -NightChime 11:28, 19 October 2009 (PDT)
