User talk:SaylorTwift21

From Create Your Own Story

If you’re going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue.

Also, don’t start to begin to actions when your characters should just act. Don’t begin to sniff when the character should just sniff. Overusing ‘begin to’ and ‘start to’ simply bog down the action.

All choices in my stories must be choices your character can make. You can't choose which other girl decides to stay last in the shower.

The demon's power is taking over other people's bodies. It does not have the power to grow male genitals on female bodies!

--Platypus 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Reply to Platypus

Thanks for the info. I've been previously told before by many people that my writing style is repetitive and counterproductive, and the grammar errors were more possibly from exhaustion and broken keyboard than me, but excuses are like assholes, everyone has one.

I didn't even think about the actions that should just start, lacking in common sense in that department. Thanks.

That should have made sense at the moment I wrote that, but oops.

Truly they are demons, infinite power... But I do apologize for just making my demon a god.

I am pretty new to the site, so any help you could offer me would be absolutely appreciated. Thanks, again!

--SaylorTwift21 00:10, 27 April 2020 (UTC)