User talk:Usr

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Revision as of 03:22, 3 December 2013 by Platypus (Talk | contribs)

Please review punctuation with dialogue. You need to use punctuation properly if you are going to post in one of my stories. --Platypus 02:44, 3 December 2013 (UTC)

Unless Travis is somehow nodding his words, He nods, "Ok, alright. Wow." really should be He nods. "Okay, all right. Wow." --Platypus 03:22, 3 December 2013 (UTC)

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