User talk:Jealco

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Please review Punctuation with dialogue. You're leaving out commas that you should be using. But otherwise, good contributions. --Platypus 23:12, 17 October 2012 (UTC)

Please change the location listed in the status bar when your character changes locations. --Platypus 09:17, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

Also, the choices should be choices your character can make, not choices she can't. She can choose to kick her shoes off, but she can't choose where they land unless she's aiming. --Platypus 12:20, 18 October 2012 (UTC)