User talk:Jealco

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Revision as of 09:17, 18 October 2012 by Platypus (Talk | contribs)

Please review Punctuation with dialogue. You're leaving out commas that you should be using. But otherwise, good contributions. --Platypus 23:12, 17 October 2012 (UTC)

Please change the location listed in the status bar when your character changes locations. --Platypus 09:17, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

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