User talk:Oswhistle
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Revision as of 22:44, 19 June 2011 by Fletcher Peninsula (Talk | contribs)
Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. --Platypus 15:11, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
I had to change the links in the page you created beacuse those links would lead to sections of the story that wasn´t supposed to follow the page that you wrote. I do think it was very well writen through, really on the same dark tone as the rest of the story and naturally flowing plot with good word use.
Fletcher Peninsula
