User talk:Farukd

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Revision as of 10:20, 9 March 2016 by Platypus (Talk | contribs)

If you're going to post in one of my stories, make sure that the choices are choices your character can make. Since you can't decide how many children you're going to have, those aren't valid choices. --Platypus 00:41, 17 September 2015 (UTC)

Please pay attention to verb tense. Don't bounce back and forth between past tense and present. --Platypus 10:19, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

I have never seen the dick once it's inside a girl before!

What on Earth does that even mean? And make sure you know the difference between its and it's --Platypus 10:20, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

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