Banished

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You have lived all your life in the enclave of New Athens--the last bastion of hope and culture--and been sheltered from the horrors of the outside world by it's huge walls. You've lived in a controlled enviroment of purified air, polished glass, perfect square gardens and synthetic food, surrounded by people that might not have been happy, but at least very very grateful to not be stuck in the wretched outside.  
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You lived your whole life in the enclave of New Hope, protected from the surrounding wasteland by it's walls, minefields, automatic turrets and well armed and ruthless gendarmery. New Hope was accepted as humanity's last bastion of science and culture; the rest of the world turned into a blasted, primitive waste. It was a highly controlled enviroment of perfect square lawns, polished glass, chrome, purified air and synthetic food. It's people might not have been exactly happy, but at least they were safe.
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The laws of New Eden was strict--nothing would be allowed to put the enclave at risk--and most people followed them. However, every now and then, someone slips. The punishment is usually ''banishment'', which is also what awaits you.
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The laws of New Hope were strict and justice swift and merciless: Antisocial behaviour would not be tolerated. Still, every now and then, someone slips, and the punishment is ''banishment''.  
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What's your story, sweet cheeks?
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What's your story?
*[[Banished/The Wasteland|A decorated police office, predicted to make a rocket career, who took a bribe]]
*[[Banished/The Wasteland|A decorated police office, predicted to make a rocket career, who took a bribe]]

Revision as of 18:08, 28 November 2015

*****DO NOT TRY TO PLAY THIS STORY YET, IT'S FAR FROM DONE*****

Banished - the story of a young woman forced out in a post-apocalyptic wasteland.


Feel free to correct any spelling errors etc (English is not my first language), but please do not change anything story related.


Your old life is over.


You lived your whole life in the enclave of New Hope, protected from the surrounding wasteland by it's walls, minefields, automatic turrets and well armed and ruthless gendarmery. New Hope was accepted as humanity's last bastion of science and culture; the rest of the world turned into a blasted, primitive waste. It was a highly controlled enviroment of perfect square lawns, polished glass, chrome, purified air and synthetic food. It's people might not have been exactly happy, but at least they were safe.


The laws of New Hope were strict and justice swift and merciless: Antisocial behaviour would not be tolerated. Still, every now and then, someone slips, and the punishment is banishment.


What's your story?

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