User talk:Blackdragon25
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When ever is one word. ''Whenever''. Girlfreind is correctly spelled ''girlfriend''. Try to use proper spelling and grammar! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:16, 25 May 2011 (UTC) | When ever is one word. ''Whenever''. Girlfreind is correctly spelled ''girlfriend''. Try to use proper spelling and grammar! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:16, 25 May 2011 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Just responding to your comments on my page. Breaking categories down into characters isn't common, but it's not unheard-of. It's not something you should have done since the beginning, but I feel it helps. I've been enjoying the story so far (keep up the good work!) which is why I've expressed such an interest in it. If I could make one comment, you should probably use a spell-checker. Other than that, though, it's great! [[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 04:24, 26 May 2011 (UTC) | ||
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Please review what you're posting as your spelling and grammar is very poor. For example:
she is taken of gaurd and your mouth agasint
should be: she is taken off guard and your mouth against
--Platypus 18:29, 18 May 2011 (UTC)
Windows have shutters. Human beings shiver and shudder. --Platypus 14:23, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
When ever is one word. Whenever. Girlfreind is correctly spelled girlfriend. Try to use proper spelling and grammar! --Platypus 14:16, 25 May 2011 (UTC)
Family Ties
Just responding to your comments on my page. Breaking categories down into characters isn't common, but it's not unheard-of. It's not something you should have done since the beginning, but I feel it helps. I've been enjoying the story so far (keep up the good work!) which is why I've expressed such an interest in it. If I could make one comment, you should probably use a spell-checker. Other than that, though, it's great! Cannon 04:24, 26 May 2011 (UTC)
