User talk:Hammerhead1004
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Hello, I noticed you did a minor edit of a page you created a while ago in the Pokesex story. I'm currently doing a massive overhaul on that story (I'm trying to leave most of the main stuff intact, I'm just going after the way the pages are categorised/labeled and things) and if you're still editing I just wanted to give you a heads up that I might have moved around a few pages and I also wanted to politely ask if I could move that page along with a few others in Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Squirtle branch. | Hello, I noticed you did a minor edit of a page you created a while ago in the Pokesex story. I'm currently doing a massive overhaul on that story (I'm trying to leave most of the main stuff intact, I'm just going after the way the pages are categorised/labeled and things) and if you're still editing I just wanted to give you a heads up that I might have moved around a few pages and I also wanted to politely ask if I could move that page along with a few others in Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Squirtle branch. | ||
Also if you have any interest in the story I'd be happy if you came back with advice and/or critiques on how the story looks at the moment (This is the first story I've decided to edit so I'm still quite new and eager to experiment) --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 17 April 2016 | Also if you have any interest in the story I'd be happy if you came back with advice and/or critiques on how the story looks at the moment (This is the first story I've decided to edit so I'm still quite new and eager to experiment) --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 17 April 2016 | ||
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| + | Hello, let me start by saying I appreciate your entries to the Game of Thrones story. I would like to discuss something that you wrote that is out of line with GoT lore, and make a couple of changes if you would allow. In the section called Fealty you have King Stannis give Littlefinger Casterly Rock, which is, I’m afraid is out of character for Stannis the Mannis. In the books Stannis expresses his disdain for Littlefinger when discussing him with the Nights Watch, he is also unlikely to reward the man who negotiated the Lannister-Tyrell alliance. I can honestly see Joffrey in an attempt to save his own neck tell Stannis and Robb that it was Littlefinger who convinced him to execute Eddard Stark. | ||
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| + | If I may make a suggestion, have Stannis allow Kevan Lannister to inherit Casterly Rock and be the Warden of the West, however Kevan’s twin sons Martyn and Willem are held in King’s Landing to serve as wards of the Iron Throne. A defeated Kevan then returns to Casterly Rock with the body of his oldest son, Lancel. We can have it where Joffrey, Littlefinger and Jaime are executed by being sacrificed to R’hllor while Cersei watches in horror. Tyrion, and Tommen as well as the other less offensive Lannisters are sent to the wall to take the black. One more thing I would like to add is to let Edric Storm (or Gendry), the bastard son of King Robert, have Storm’s End if in title only. Stannis will be able to keep an eye on him, and if he is in King’s Landing other lords can’t use him to take the throne, and he is also a potential heir if something were to happen to Shireen. --[[User:LHX1978|LHX1978]] | ||
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Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. If you don't know how to add categories, please review the Tutorial, especially Basic page format.--Platypus 21:20, 1 March 2016 (UTC)
Hello, I noticed you did a minor edit of a page you created a while ago in the Pokesex story. I'm currently doing a massive overhaul on that story (I'm trying to leave most of the main stuff intact, I'm just going after the way the pages are categorised/labeled and things) and if you're still editing I just wanted to give you a heads up that I might have moved around a few pages and I also wanted to politely ask if I could move that page along with a few others in Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Squirtle branch. Also if you have any interest in the story I'd be happy if you came back with advice and/or critiques on how the story looks at the moment (This is the first story I've decided to edit so I'm still quite new and eager to experiment) --Hellspawn 17 April 2016
Hello, let me start by saying I appreciate your entries to the Game of Thrones story. I would like to discuss something that you wrote that is out of line with GoT lore, and make a couple of changes if you would allow. In the section called Fealty you have King Stannis give Littlefinger Casterly Rock, which is, I’m afraid is out of character for Stannis the Mannis. In the books Stannis expresses his disdain for Littlefinger when discussing him with the Nights Watch, he is also unlikely to reward the man who negotiated the Lannister-Tyrell alliance. I can honestly see Joffrey in an attempt to save his own neck tell Stannis and Robb that it was Littlefinger who convinced him to execute Eddard Stark.
If I may make a suggestion, have Stannis allow Kevan Lannister to inherit Casterly Rock and be the Warden of the West, however Kevan’s twin sons Martyn and Willem are held in King’s Landing to serve as wards of the Iron Throne. A defeated Kevan then returns to Casterly Rock with the body of his oldest son, Lancel. We can have it where Joffrey, Littlefinger and Jaime are executed by being sacrificed to R’hllor while Cersei watches in horror. Tyrion, and Tommen as well as the other less offensive Lannisters are sent to the wall to take the black. One more thing I would like to add is to let Edric Storm (or Gendry), the bastard son of King Robert, have Storm’s End if in title only. Stannis will be able to keep an eye on him, and if he is in King’s Landing other lords can’t use him to take the throne, and he is also a potential heir if something were to happen to Shireen. --LHX1978
