Downfall

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''This story is a bundle of stereotypes - don't expect a fresh view on the genre. You are on a vacation with three family members, which alone should be enough to let you know what the main focus will be. You'll be able to avoid this kind of behavior - it might become a bit boring, though. There is only limited continuity in branching. A character's mood, clothing or intent can vary even from the two choices of the same page.''  
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''This story is a bundle of stereotypes - don't expect a fresh view on the genre. You are on a vacation with members of your family, which alone should be enough to let you know what the main focus will be. You'll be able to avoid this kind of behavior - it might become a bit boring, though. There is only limited continuity in branching. A character's mood, clothing or intent can vary even from the two choices of the same page.''  
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''The characters might indulge in other somehow deviant activities. It's just a game - if you are open-minded, play along. If you are not, better retry when you reach a point you deem inappropriate.''
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''The characters might indulge in other somehow deviant activities. It's just a game - if you are open-minded, play along. If you are not, better retry when you reach a point you deem inappropriate. Continue at your own risk.''
''Please do not change or add pages (unless you correct my orthography, which you are welcome to do). Thank you.  - [[User:Minnie_May_Hopkins|Minnie May Hopkins]]''
''Please do not change or add pages (unless you correct my orthography, which you are welcome to do). Thank you.  - [[User:Minnie_May_Hopkins|Minnie May Hopkins]]''
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Finally, your first day without work has arrived. You took two weeks off, and you saved up enough money to go on vacation, albeit not the whole two weeks. The only downside is that you have to spend your vacation with your family. Ah well, still better than staying at home.
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Finally, your first day of your vacation has arrived. The whole family is going on vacation, and like activity with your relatives, it can turn out to be the best or the worst of times. But no matter, anything is better than staying at home.
You close your luggage and look into the mirror to straighten your hair. Staring back at you is:
You close your luggage and look into the mirror to straighten your hair. Staring back at you is:

Revision as of 20:15, 29 December 2014

This story is a bundle of stereotypes - don't expect a fresh view on the genre. You are on a vacation with members of your family, which alone should be enough to let you know what the main focus will be. You'll be able to avoid this kind of behavior - it might become a bit boring, though. There is only limited continuity in branching. A character's mood, clothing or intent can vary even from the two choices of the same page.

The characters might indulge in other somehow deviant activities. It's just a game - if you are open-minded, play along. If you are not, better retry when you reach a point you deem inappropriate. Continue at your own risk.

Please do not change or add pages (unless you correct my orthography, which you are welcome to do). Thank you. - Minnie May Hopkins


Finally, your first day of your vacation has arrived. The whole family is going on vacation, and like activity with your relatives, it can turn out to be the best or the worst of times. But no matter, anything is better than staying at home.

You close your luggage and look into the mirror to straighten your hair. Staring back at you is:


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