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'''IF SOMEONE WANTS TO FINISH THIS STORY FOR ME, THAT'D BE GREAT. I'M PROBABLY NOT GONNA WORK ON IT ANYMORE.'''
''The day before...''
''The day before...''
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It was a bright and sunny Monday morning. You woke up, and noticed the alarm had gone off....2 hours ago. You were late to work. Angry by this, you walk furosiously into your wife's bedroom, and grab her by the throat and pin her against the wall.
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It was a bright and sunny Monday morning. You woke up, and noticed the alarm had gone off....2 hours ago. You were late to work. Angeredy by this, you walk furosiously into your wife's bedroom, and grab her by the throat and pin her against the wall.
"You Bitch! Are you trying to get me fired? ARE YOU!?"
"You Bitch! Are you trying to get me fired? ARE YOU!?"
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"Wha..What are you talking about?" She had a tremble in her voice. She was obviously frightened.
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"Wha... What are you talking about?" She had a tremble in her voice. She was obviously frightened.
"You hear my alarm going off, and you don't even come to get me up! I'm going to be late to work, and I'll probably be fired!"
"You hear my alarm going off, and you don't even come to get me up! I'm going to be late to work, and I'll probably be fired!"
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You slap her as hard as you can, then throw her across the room.
You slap her as hard as you can, then throw her across the room.
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"I WAS SLEEPING, JOSH! I DIDN'T.." She started to cry. "I'm leaving, Josh. GOODBYE!"
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"I WAS SLEEPING, JOSH! I DIDN'T..." She started to cry. "I'm leaving, Josh. GOODBYE!"
She almost got out when you grabbed her arm. "Oh no you're.." She she punches you in the face as hard as you can, leaving you to bleed. Damn she can hit, you thought.
She almost got out when you grabbed her arm. "Oh no you're.." She she punches you in the face as hard as you can, leaving you to bleed. Damn she can hit, you thought.
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"You bitch." you said.
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"You bitch," you said.
And just like that, she was gone.
And just like that, she was gone.
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You run over to the mysterious person and start beating them up.
You run over to the mysterious person and start beating them up.
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"Who the hell do you think you are, huh?" You say. You had a knife in your pocket you always carried around, and just as you were about to pull it out, the figure pulls out some spray and sprays you--not fatally--but just blind you for a second so they could get a way. After about 5 minutes, you are able to open your eyes.
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"Who the hell do you think you are, huh?" you say. You had a knife in your pocket you always carried around, and just as you were about to pull it out, the figure pulls out some spray and sprays you--not fatally--but just blind you for a second so they could get a way. After about 5 minutes, you are able to open your eyes.
You see the tape. You open the truck and hold it in your hands. Obviously whoever placed it there was long gone.  
You see the tape. You open the truck and hold it in your hands. Obviously whoever placed it there was long gone.  
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[[Saw=Don't play the tape]]
[[Saw=Don't play the tape]]
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Current revision as of 21:28, 7 October 2009

IF SOMEONE WANTS TO FINISH THIS STORY FOR ME, THAT'D BE GREAT. I'M PROBABLY NOT GONNA WORK ON IT ANYMORE. The day before...

It was a bright and sunny Monday morning. You woke up, and noticed the alarm had gone off....2 hours ago. You were late to work. Angeredy by this, you walk furosiously into your wife's bedroom, and grab her by the throat and pin her against the wall.

"You Bitch! Are you trying to get me fired? ARE YOU!?"

"Wha... What are you talking about?" She had a tremble in her voice. She was obviously frightened.

"You hear my alarm going off, and you don't even come to get me up! I'm going to be late to work, and I'll probably be fired!"

You slap her as hard as you can, then throw her across the room.

"I WAS SLEEPING, JOSH! I DIDN'T..." She started to cry. "I'm leaving, Josh. GOODBYE!"

She almost got out when you grabbed her arm. "Oh no you're.." She she punches you in the face as hard as you can, leaving you to bleed. Damn she can hit, you thought.

"You bitch," you said.

And just like that, she was gone.

You had to sit down. "Oh, God"

30 minutes passed without a word. You just sat there, in deep depression, not even considering the fact to go to work. Suddenly you hear someone going through your truck. You look to see who it is, and it's somebody in a pig mask, placing a tape-recorder onto the seat of the truck.

"HEY!" you call out.

You run over to the mysterious person and start beating them up.

"Who the hell do you think you are, huh?" you say. You had a knife in your pocket you always carried around, and just as you were about to pull it out, the figure pulls out some spray and sprays you--not fatally--but just blind you for a second so they could get a way. After about 5 minutes, you are able to open your eyes.

You see the tape. You open the truck and hold it in your hands. Obviously whoever placed it there was long gone.

What do you do?

Saw=Play the tape

Saw=Don't play the tape

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