On the main deck

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You walk onto the deck while the excersize did work...only temporarily.
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You walk onto the deck. The excersize did work...only temporarily.
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You noticed nobody bothered to look up from their duties while the doors swooshed.
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You noticed nobody bothered to look up from their duties while the doors opened.
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Feeling the pain shoot through your soul for being ignored reminding you of all the previous times people had done that to you just for being an alien...you gazed over the sea of apathetic people.
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Feeling the pain shoot through your soul, it reminded you that back at the academy people had shunned you just for being an alien. Taking a deep breath as you came back to the present, you gaze over the sea of apathetic people.
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You somehow mangae to spot two men who appears to be slacking off their job to the far left corner clearly far from the rest of the massive group.
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You somehow mangage to spot two men who appears to be slacking off from their job to the far left corner far from the rest of the sea of preoccupied workers.
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The two men whispered amongst themselves as if they were silently spreading interesting gossip...if you listen in you may lose some of your reputation.
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The two men whispered amongst themselves as if they were silently spreading interesting gossip. If you listen in, you can learn interesting information yet you also may lose some of your reputation.
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It seems like you can do anything here to clear your mind...and the only way to get an idea is to walk to your office.
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Besides, you ran out of ideas to clear your mind...the only way to get an idea is to walk to your office.

Revision as of 01:06, 1 November 2019

You walk onto the deck. The excersize did work...only temporarily.


You noticed nobody bothered to look up from their duties while the doors opened.


Feeling the pain shoot through your soul, it reminded you that back at the academy people had shunned you just for being an alien. Taking a deep breath as you came back to the present, you gaze over the sea of apathetic people.


You somehow mangage to spot two men who appears to be slacking off from their job to the far left corner far from the rest of the sea of preoccupied workers.


The two men whispered amongst themselves as if they were silently spreading interesting gossip. If you listen in, you can learn interesting information yet you also may lose some of your reputation.


Besides, you ran out of ideas to clear your mind...the only way to get an idea is to walk to your office.


Do you leave?


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