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Hi, I saw your message. I'm glad you like my stuff :3.
Hi, I saw your message. I'm glad you like my stuff :3.
I hope you're still present on the site (I've been absent quite a bit recently, so I only saw your message today). If you are, maybe you could pop me a message saying what specifically you liked (and stuff I could do better, of course :p). --[[User:Incubus|Incubus]] 18:35, 12 October 2017 (UTC)
I hope you're still present on the site (I've been absent quite a bit recently, so I only saw your message today). If you are, maybe you could pop me a message saying what specifically you liked (and stuff I could do better, of course :p). --[[User:Incubus|Incubus]] 18:35, 12 October 2017 (UTC)
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Yeah, I still come around to read things from time to time though I mostly check out chyoa than this site. I'll be honest a lot of my enjoyment has been superficial I always liked erotica set in a Fantasy or medieval setting and your story has some kinks I enjoy, but also you seem to have put some effort into this and many of the paths have a robust amount of content, it also seems like you enjoy it. And Id say the biggest improvement is probably simple things like spelling grammar and word choice (not that yours is super bad or anything by any means but its something that always can use work :D) - Spiritwind
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Yeah, I do try to have good grammar, but I know what you mean. Sometime a 'you' drops instead of a 'your' or something. Thanks for the feedback, though. I might have to do some further snooping around chyoa, if you know what I mean (to improve my grammar, of course ;p). --[[User:Incubus|Incubus]] 18:24, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
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Hey, it's me again. Been a while since we talked, so I don't know if you still remember me, but I thought I'd let you know that I'm back to working on [[Fantasy Creatures]] again. Would love to get more feedback if you don't mind sharing. Anything you liked specifically about what I'd written before, anything you thought I could do better with. Thanks in advance. --[[User:Incubus|Incubus]] 01:23, 7 October 2019 (UTC)

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Incubus's Talk

Hi, I saw your message. I'm glad you like my stuff :3.

I hope you're still present on the site (I've been absent quite a bit recently, so I only saw your message today). If you are, maybe you could pop me a message saying what specifically you liked (and stuff I could do better, of course :p). --Incubus 18:35, 12 October 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, I do try to have good grammar, but I know what you mean. Sometime a 'you' drops instead of a 'your' or something. Thanks for the feedback, though. I might have to do some further snooping around chyoa, if you know what I mean (to improve my grammar, of course ;p). --Incubus 18:24, 18 October 2017 (UTC)

Hey, it's me again. Been a while since we talked, so I don't know if you still remember me, but I thought I'd let you know that I'm back to working on Fantasy Creatures again. Would love to get more feedback if you don't mind sharing. Anything you liked specifically about what I'd written before, anything you thought I could do better with. Thanks in advance. --Incubus 01:23, 7 October 2019 (UTC)

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