Ed the swim and polo star

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You walk over to Ed, who is talking to a couple of buddies. He looks at you when you walk up to him
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You walk casually over towards Ed, who is busy talking among a few other swim students. Standing at a slight distance, you wait until the others head into the pool, before you close in on Ed, grabbing his attention with a greeting and a shy wave.
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"You guys go practice, I'll be there in a second," Ed said.
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"Hey, you new?"
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His friends go and practice their swimming routine.  
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He seems a little uncertain about why you're talking to him, but he still appears friendly. After telling him you are, and that you're not really sure what you should be doing, he looks to relax, a bit.
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"Hi,"You say shyly.  
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"How about you start off with some stretches? I'll even help you, if you want."
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"Hey, you new?" Ed asks.
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Do you take him up on his offer?
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You think he is actually kinda cute, with those nice abs and charming smile, you think you can get away with this.
 
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{{HSTemplate|Health=100|Gender=Female|Social Group=Swim Team|Boyfriend/Girlfriend= none|Equipment= Backpack, small bag with suit, hat, goggles, and shower supplies}}
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*[[Say you'd love the help]]
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*[[Thank him, but say you'll be fine on your own]]
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{{HSTemplate|Health=100|Gender=Female|Social Group=Swim Team|Boyfriend/Girlfriend= none|Equipment= goggles}}
[[Category: High School]]
[[Category: High School]]

Revision as of 02:43, 20 November 2014

You walk casually over towards Ed, who is busy talking among a few other swim students. Standing at a slight distance, you wait until the others head into the pool, before you close in on Ed, grabbing his attention with a greeting and a shy wave.

"Hey, you new?"

He seems a little uncertain about why you're talking to him, but he still appears friendly. After telling him you are, and that you're not really sure what you should be doing, he looks to relax, a bit.

"How about you start off with some stretches? I'll even help you, if you want."

Do you take him up on his offer?


Status Bar
Health 100 Equipment:

goggles

Status {{{Status}}}
Gender Female
Social Group Swim Team
Boyfriend/Girlfriend none
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