User talk:Kanin451
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Sorry, I try to do my best and am getting better. I just sometimes go back into a sentence, add a few things, and unconsciously put another period without even noticing. It's strange. It's the same with "its" and "it's", I sometimes just forget the ', or add one without thinking. I usually have to re-read what I write at least four times, but even then I miss things. Nobody's perfect, I guess. Especially me. Again, sorry about that, and thanks for the compliment, I'll try and do better from now on. - Kanin | Sorry, I try to do my best and am getting better. I just sometimes go back into a sentence, add a few things, and unconsciously put another period without even noticing. It's strange. It's the same with "its" and "it's", I sometimes just forget the ', or add one without thinking. I usually have to re-read what I write at least four times, but even then I miss things. Nobody's perfect, I guess. Especially me. Again, sorry about that, and thanks for the compliment, I'll try and do better from now on. - Kanin | ||
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| + | I think in the slime monster storyline started from [[Wake all cozy]],the protagonist is kinda out of her character(shy and lack confidence), what do you think? --[[User:Borkenone|Borkenone]] 19:47, 13 October 2013 (UTC) | ||
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If you're going to contribute to one of my stories, such as Smutty Sex Romp, please try to watch your grammar and punctuation.
Remember that it's means it is and its means belonging to it.
End sentences with periods. Don't mash sentences together with commas.
And don't use more than one punctuation mark at the end of a sentence. That's only for comic books and this is not a comic book.
But other than relatively minor things like that, you've got an interesting thread going. --Platypus 16:49, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
Sorry, I try to do my best and am getting better. I just sometimes go back into a sentence, add a few things, and unconsciously put another period without even noticing. It's strange. It's the same with "its" and "it's", I sometimes just forget the ', or add one without thinking. I usually have to re-read what I write at least four times, but even then I miss things. Nobody's perfect, I guess. Especially me. Again, sorry about that, and thanks for the compliment, I'll try and do better from now on. - Kanin
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I think in the slime monster storyline started from Wake all cozy,the protagonist is kinda out of her character(shy and lack confidence), what do you think? --Borkenone 19:47, 13 October 2013 (UTC)
