User talk:Damasig4

From Create Your Own Story

Please read through the tutorial and learn how to format pages before you post again. --Platypus 11:43, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

And please, please, write the story in a way that makes sense. I am not going to fix all the story pages to make sure it follows the actions of the last part, because I know nothing of the story, and do not feel comfortable writing in a matching language, so only wrote it minimally, so at least it flows properly. You had the "Wake up, watch TV", leading to "Zombie sex", leading to "Wake up, watch TV". Just continue from where the last part left off, not start again at the beginning. --Dirty Me 13:21, 17 March 2014 (UTC)