User talk:Goohoojoo

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If you have any comments or suggestions about my work, please leave them here and I'll hopefully see them.

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Hey man, I just read your scene with the spirit possessing the swim coach, and it reminded me of a scene in one of my stories. If you want to read something new, have a read of my story The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra. I'd really like some comments and feedback, and ideas for more to write.

I've also thought about editing rampage in places, but am going to try to finish chapter 2 of my story first. Its a bit different from most stories, because although it branches in places, the various branches join back together again later on, so there are no dead ends (or won't be, once its finished). Anyway, please have a read and let me know what you think Hornlarry 19:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)

Thanks! One of my goals with Rampage is to tie things together better. The branching in the story is so out of control that there's a ton of nice content that's just too damn hard to find. One of my favorite pages torturing poor Jared is *Cripple this stupid kid's body, which includes a blurb about tie-ins in its discussion. I try to use existing characters as much as possible. My favorite characters by far are Katy Haas (somebody did a great job building an interesting character there) and my own Jared, who while a lot less artistic is just fun to fuck with. I was going at it in earnest for a while until the site crapped out, but now that it seems to be functional again I've decided to start writing more.

Just so you know... Blond is for males and blonde is for females. The French origins have been retained in the English adjective. --Platypus 02:04, 18 April 2014 (UTC)