Talk:Invite Janie to join you

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I think there is a problem here: Janie wastes no time in appearing,

Are you sure "appearing" is the word you are looking for?

Feel free to change it to "entering the room" if it bothers you that much.

Ok, sorry, I misunderstood. Not trying to offend, just wanted to try to help. --Dirty Me 17:59, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

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