User talk:Usr
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Please review punctuation with dialogue. You need to use punctuation properly if you are going to post in one of my stories. --Platypus 02:44, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
Unless Travis is somehow nodding his words, He nods, "Ok, alright. Wow." really should be He nods. "Okay, all right. Wow." --Platypus 03:22, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
"Maybe.." You reply with a mysterious wink. should be written as "Maybe," you reply with a mysterious wink. --Platypus 03:34, 3 December 2013 (UTC)