User talk:Blackdragon25

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Please review what you're posting as your spelling and grammar is very poor. For example:

she is taken of gaurd and your mouth agasint

should be: she is taken off guard and your mouth against

--Platypus 18:29, 18 May 2011 (UTC)

Windows have shutters. Human beings shiver and shudder. --Platypus 14:23, 19 May 2011 (UTC)

When ever is one word. Whenever. Girlfreind is correctly spelled girlfriend. Try to use proper spelling and grammar! --Platypus 14:16, 25 May 2011 (UTC)

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Just responding to your comments on my page. Breaking categories down into characters isn't common, but it's not unheard-of. It's not something you should have done since the beginning, but I feel it helps. I've been enjoying the story so far (keep up the good work!) which is why I've expressed such an interest in it. If I could make one comment, you should probably use a spell-checker. Other than that, though, it's great! Cannon 04:24, 26 May 2011 (UTC)