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I just wanted to let you know, if you want to read the story I am writing on DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip and let me know what you think, what is wrong, what is right, etc, it would be great. I was just thinking I had asked Fred and Teejay, but not you. Honestly, I didn't more because I didn't think you would really want to. But, I realized just now I was assuming that without even asking xD So, sorry for the delayed asking. --Dirty Me 04:22, 10 September 2016 (UTC)

Wow, I haven't been on this site for months and yet I still find you with the daily routine. Props! Just dropping by to say hello.--Completionist 04:40, 9 August 2016 (UTC)

I've heard DirtyMe has been giving around flowers so because I have been up for 18 hours straight, here is something in the same spirit:

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All glory.--Fredhot16 01:36 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

Hey, Platypus. There's this CYOS called "A YOUNG BOY'S NIGHT (GAY)". I think you might to want to move it from the Mature Story Section. Seriously, check it out. I've haven't read more then a few pages but I'm pretty sure it doesn't fit there.---Fredhot16 16:20 (Louisiana Time), 27 January 2017

Yeah, that's probably true. I'll start reverting pages back.--Underside 02:06, 15 July 2016 (UTC)

Okay, in an effort to satisfy everybody I templated each section page for All Adult Stories. Then I added the templates to the main index for the best of both worlds. Now edits in a section of any page will show up under the main index and the individual page. The main page still has parser issues though. I hope it's alright like this. If so I could do this for the PG-13 pages too. --Underside 01:33, 15 July 2016 (UTC)

Alright, thanks. I wanted to keep the structure the same as much as possible. I like the idea of a single page index too. I considered making the split pages alongside the main index, but the extra bookkeeping of maintaining two indexes didn't seem like a better way. I'll check for edits that happened between now I when I split the pages, and incorporate any I find before I change it. --Underside 20:47, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

Hi there, I'm kinda new to the wiki, but I have been working on cleaning up the adult and PG-13 stories. Both pages currently have too many parser calls and the 50kb adult page won't let me edit with my phone browser. I broke up the pages as suggested on the discussion page. DirtyMe suggested I check with you before making big edits to the indexes though. I have links to the changes I made here and here respectively. Would it be alright if I break the pages up? --Underside 15:44, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

lol, that is why I mentioned that path specifically. While the rest is rather questionable in the first place, it could be argued on why it should be allowed. However, the single path seemed to pass beyond what Rob wanted. Actually, I think it was me that ironically made it available. When I came across one page, I got the content not welcome message, so I edited it so the page displayed properly. Then, the pages were suddenly able to be read. I agree about not liking to censor stuff. Honestly, I don't understand people that like that kind of thing, but I would rather they just write and fantasize than actually do stuff in real life. Like an outlet. Seems better to me anyways, since I can just avoid reading it if I want to. Lets face it, Dirty Me is an outlet for my own personal fantasies, since I can no longer really live them out. --Dirty Me 01:58, 30 June 2016 (UTC)

While I was reading through Life of a 13 year old for the review, I came across this path: Stalk an elementary school

This path has red links mostly, and the only written options lead the main character have sex with a 10 year old girl, ending with the character piercing her uterus and cumming inside her chest, next to her heart. I am unsure if this goes beyond Rob's rules, so wanted to let you know in case it should potentially be removed. I am not here to judge it, just to make sure you were aware in case this should be removed or modified to comply with the rules. I will let you judge if it is acceptable. (Personally, I find the whole story offensive, and questionable (since it is mostly supposed to be a 13 year old doing all these things), but that is a different issue...) --Dirty Me 05:00, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for your kind words and sage advice. A few thoughts you might want to consider:

  • I finally built up the courage to make a contribution, and added a couple pages to an existing story. That's a big step. My first feedback is from a sysop who, rather than offering any sort of encouragement or advice, suggests I should be writing for a comic book. Not exactly the kind of behavior one would hope for in a sysop.
  • I personally have no problem with feedback, but would hope it might come in a less douche-filled format. Particularly from a grizzled veteran such as yourself. That said, I'm not simply going to bow down and worship at the altar of Platypus. You have the power to ban...you've made it very clear. You've mentioned at every opportunity that you have special sysop powers. If your ego is so sensitive that you can't handle someone standing up to you, then ban away. A bully will be a bully...even in egg-laying mammalian clothing.
  • I have no interest in getting into a pissing match. As previously stated, I simply was taken aback by your initial foray into doucheville. I've since come to understand that you were simply being you. I've dealt with cyber-bullies before, and will do so again. If you feel the need to flex your virtual muscles and remind everyone who is in charge, then feel free. Some guys need that sort of thing to get off. It takes more than a few snarky comments to scare me away. Can we hug it out now?

Hope this has been helpful.

Kindest regards, --Bardo75 23:41, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Did you honestly just ban me from editing "your stories" because I posted a snarky response to your grammar nazism, then thought better of it an deleted my own post? I think perhaps Mr Sysop is letting his title go to his head. --Bardo75 01:17, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Hey, mind looking at "Escape from Syria" and "A Boy's Night Out" in the Mature Story section? I think they're Adult stories that somehow wandered into the Mature Story section. --User:Fredhot16 12:20, 19 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I didn't understand half of that...so...I am not completely sure if you are making fun of me or not xD Anyways, I have asked Teejay to look over my raider tale story I have completed for some proof reading. FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1. I am not sure if you would be willing to or not. I assume it is easy enough to understand, even without knowing about the game. Raiders are the thieves, murderers, raiding groups. Deathclaw is just scary, like it sounds. And the random food is super low quality food that you would not even think of as worth stealing. The setting is the world after lots of atom bombs fell, so a giant, irradiated wasteland with mutated things running around trying to kill everything. Oh, and a Yao guai is a mutated bear. TMI? --Dirty Me 09:18, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Sigh...where did everyone go? I keep seeing change after change of one name, then another name replaces, but it seems like it is relatively few people active right now...

I haven't even seen you in the logs lately.

btw, ever played fallout games? Wondering what you think of my new stuff if you have. Not getting much feedback from anyone on them lately... --Dirty Me 15:21, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

I explained how I do images. Maybe it will help him. --Dirty Me 02:34, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

I keep seeing Story Reviews on the front page, but...nothing is ever done.

I am slowly going to try to build a review system. I will change it as I go, probably with some key words in a template on the main rating page, giving the story link, review link, etc, but for now, I am just starting the thing. I am hoping after it is developed enough, we can use it to replace the Story Reviews page. Or, would it be better for me to blank The Review, and just modify Story Reviews? I was thinking of just making a page per story, with my review and let others also add their reviews if they wish, but I want to know your thoughts. I will play with templates later to try to get right. I will of course include the same info as in the Story Reviews, but in a nice table format. Title, link, review page link, page count, probably some key terms (Especially when I get to adult). But, again, I am a bit worried about how many pages I will create. I am also going to have a cutoff, pagecount. Like, under 20 pages, unless your story is 100% complete, I won't bother. I wanted your thoughts, since I think it would be better for people to understand the stories. --Dirty Me 09:19, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

Okay, this is a strange request. So, for your smutty sex romp, on the female path, would you be willing to write about a strange...fantasy...I have?

I can't explain the fantasy, and know it is really strange...but, I have always had a fantasy of taking a bath in a bathtub full of cum...

I wrote a little short, more as a funny short, for this: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2013/10/a-withdrawal-from-sperm-bank-cum.html. I know, if inspiration hits you, but it can't really hit you if you don't think of it xD --Dirty Me 15:15, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

I sort guessed it was there to stop spambots but it's annoying nonetheless. Ah Well. I'll see how much I can move to the pit before I get distracted (it might not be a lot) -- Hellspawn 09:15 29 May GMT

Is there anyway to remove the captcha thing that pops up after every few pages. I was trying to be helpful and move a bunch of stuff over to the PIT OF ABANDONED STORIES (Great name btw) and after copying and pasting the names of the stories from 'All Adult Stories' to the 'Pit of Abandoned stories' page and I pressed save on the pit editing thing, fine, then I pressed save on the other page and suddenly I was presented with a captcha, filled in the captcha and then lost all the edits I had just made to the page. I think I've rectified the mistake but the annoyance, although minor, is not ideal. (Also I hope you don't mind me moving things to the pit, just felt like it needed a clean up.) -- Hellspawn 27 May 21:21 GMT

lol, no comment about the dick I left on Zenclair's page? Yeah, I actually should remove it...honestly, I read over some of his stuff, and found it rather demeaning, so I hinted at him that I thought he was a dick. I sort of feel bad about that now. --Dirty Me 02:01, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, hidden stories gives me ideas. Wonder what someone would say if I wrote an entire CYoS story, but when they saw the text they saw nothing. It isn't until they drag the mouse that they realize the font is white, the story is there and complete, but no one can see it xD

Maybe have a second story purely in pop-up text (using the <p title="Some words will pop up when you hover your house over the words of the paragraph">Something</p>

Now I am getting better ideas for Context xD --Dirty Me 15:32, 26 May 2016 (UTC)


Ok mr.platypus. im gonna say that my story is gdeleted by me and I am finding people who can contribute to my story in my place(In my city actually) and then I will rewrite it. I may not include the title or category cause im still finding people who can help me with this Since then I will not add choices to the I am male thinggy. I might as well not reply to people including you too. I may not be online too Then after that I will make it a looong story. ps im removing "low priority" discussions from my discussion. pps my story I cant publish it in public first Because many will put things in that. I must say that putting my story in my talk page is a kind of privacy which means only selected people or people who know me can read it because I dont talk to "Low priority" people. IT STAYS HIDDEN WHILE I MAKE IT. MR PLATYPUS.

And a flower for Platypus! --Dirty Me 10:00, 24 May 2016 (UTC)

About rampage: You know, the way it is set up, why doesn't someone create subcategories for the currently possessed character? Like [[Category: Rampage:Black Cat]]? Then, the victim pages, like Ashley Duruma, could just be category pages with the text on the page put in as the text of the category page. Just a though xD --Dirty Me 04:42, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, I have been trying to change the 6th grade girl in rampage to 12th grade girl, and I found something. The rancher part, with the horses and stuff, is making me feel rather nauseous... I think I will stop touching that story and let someone else change her to 12th grade...before I throw up... --Dirty Me 06:15, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

I don't want to sound picky but is there any way to get my pages that I wrote like that? I understand that there was a slight spelling error on one and I messed up use of the status bar, but I went on there this morning to correct the and the majority had been taken down. That was over an hours writing that I'm a little miffed about having to redo for a misunderstanding since it was my first time adding to one of these pages. It's very intimidating getting a message a few seconds after you step out and try to share something on here simply because you slightly misunderstood the code. I'm new, and I am sorry about it, but I can't be perfect on my first post. Did I do something else wrong or do you really take people's post's down without giving them a chance to edit mistakes, because of my time zone this was the first chance I had to log on and check them. --User:JulietMai

Hey Platypus, wanted to ask you a question about the new rules. Now that we're not allowed to write about underage characters a lot of the old stories have been deleted. Some of them were my favorites that I worked hard on. Are they gone forever or are they archived somewhere? I would love to transcribe them to the allthefallen stories site instead. Thanks! (Bellajones)

lol, I have been with a guy who was "Well endowed". He hurt, alot. Wish I had known about that ring thing before that. I would have made him use it. Instead, we only had sex one time. I never let him touch me again. Oh well, wasn't a serious thing anyways. --Dirty Me 10:14, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for pointing out the mistake. I am seriously beginning to speak Chinglish. Think I even have a little bit of a Chinese-English accent now...

So, what do you think of my DirtyMeStoryTime Rants? I know they are making fun of people, but I am at least trying to keep them interesting enough that they are readable. Also, not sure about your thoughts on my User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences. I had a bit of discussion with this with Teejay, but I also know it crosses from "Story" to "Bio", so not sure if I should even put it here. Your thoughts? Basically, just trying to let those who like my writing know a bit about who I am. At least, in the areas that most people on here would care about, given most people on here are mostly All Adult Stories oriented. Guess it is more of a "Hey, do you wonder why I write mostly erotica? Here you go" thing. --Dirty Me 05:02, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

Noted, I will apply to the others then, just wanted to check before I did too much. I will try to improve it, trying to figure out how to get them to line up, but at least it is another step towards a nicer, more graphic website for us all ^.^ --Dirty Me 12:38, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

I have tried to add a nice looking template to the family friendly section on the front page. If you do not like it, we can revert. --Dirty Me 04:55, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Dood can I ask something? I need you to please help me. Seriously and do you have a place that we can talk privately.

Yours, Michael. hehe really put that to help me(PLS SERSLY AND ALSO I WONT BE HOME TOMORROW SO I CANT REPLY BUT I WILL REPLY AS SOON AS I GET HOME Thanks) -- User:Michaeltamayo96

Dude I just read the tutorial and im new so dont expect me to write such many branches. --Michaeltamayo96

So I hope you don't mind me making fun of Smutty Sex Romp in my DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts path. --Dirty Me 11:51, 27 April 2016 (UTC)


Please check Special:Contributions/Njrsgg. I have edited one of the stories that was posted that contained "under age vagina", but looking through many of his posts, it is still pretty obvious, even though I removed mention of the underage and 4th grade" and that kind of thing. I have also warned him. But, I think you may still want to look through his pages to decide what may be too close to the editthis ban on content. --Dirty Me 02:41, 26 April 2016 (UTC)

*Sniff* You haven't given me any options for The Exhibitionist. You should be able to give me great options. I will write the story, just want creative ways to show myself off xD --Dirty Me 09:17, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

It will be filled out over time as I come up with more ideas for the story. Unfortunately, I tend to take my time with writing so It'll mostly come out in bits and pieces. --User:Fredhot16 12:03, 25 January 2015 (UTC)

What the hell is "shotgun-wielding" supposed to mean? Here's what I mean: "Miss Natsume. Shotgun wielding teacher. Long dark purple hair, matching eyes. 5'8. C Cup." Really, what is it supposed to mean? Other then the obvious denotation but I haven't seen a anime where teachers are allowed to bring firearms to school and I get the feeling that it's supposed to be related to her personality.--User:Fredhot16 10:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hell yeah! I've discovered TV Tropes before I found this website. I even have my own troper profile:Fredhot16.--User:Fredhot16 10:32, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Is it O.K to find empty discussion pages and put in a trope list of what tropes I think fits the page's content?--User:Fredhot16 07:53, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Please check Special:Contributions/Sup. Teejay reversed the damage. --Dirty Me 05:24, 13 April 2016 (UTC)

Added a Rules page and linked it on the front page. I guess it is strange to tell them to follow the rules, and have no rules page, so... Anyways, I will let you edit it if you feel the need, add, subtract, modify, etc. --Dirty Me 02:03, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, it's User:Vgybhu. You gave me some helpful formatting advice for my Monster Girl Adventure story, but its in such an early state its not even playable. I guess I just wanted to say 'message received' and ask for any advice on how to keep my story progressing but allow me to write in 20 mins bursts. I'll keep the update log and option descriptions labeled for now with % complete, although I was hoping to write my story in chunks with one encounter for each character/start point (So it'll take awhile before there is actually a path to play into).

I formatted a couple links on the main page to try to help them stand out. I did in a single edit, so it can be easily reverted if you do not like. Maybe someone can take my idea and make it look better, I just made them look like buttons xD Anyways, if you do not like, please feel free to revert, and I won't feel bad. If anyone does like, well, perhaps someone else can modify the template to make it look better. It was actually a test template I was working on to try to make the index's themselves look better, but I could not get them to look right. --Dirty Me 05:53, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

I think I meant it to be the present case they were currently having sex? I am not really sure, but I will check later because I have things to do. I though I wrote in present tense cause I did not really check over my work though.User:GirlOnGirlFan!

Um, oops, I kind of got them mixed up its been a while since I wrote something. Did you edit it if not I will. And next time I will check my work more thoroughly. User:GirlOnGirlFan!

Sorry, think I overwhelmed the poor guy :o I was trying to help, not intimidate xD (hint check histories...)

Am I really that intimidating? I want others to tell me what I am doing wrong in my writing, so I thought it would help...--Dirty Me 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

You are not replying, so I will write one page and if you do not like it simply delete it. From GirlOnGirlFan! to Platypus.

I read your stories Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage, I must say your writing is truly marvelous. To be honest, I only created this account to tell you that because I am no easy person to please, In fact I am quite finicky in writing and reading other peoples stories, others work usually disappoints me and one request. The request is may I write some pages in your stories? As a huge fan of your work it would be such an honor for you to let me contribute to your superb stories! I would only write one page for a demo of my skills and you tell me if you want me to continue contributing or not. From GirlOnGirlFan! to Platypus.

Hi Platypus, it's Whining Winnie. The reason I haven't been able to chat is because you've done something to like this page, so when on my DSi (I mostly use the internet browser on that) i try to send you messages about stuff, it won't let me type, similar to the problem user AllyG was having. Did you like change like the format or anything on this page? Also is anybody working on Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga?? Thanks, Whining Winnie Happy Easter Everyone!

The reason is why I do not have the grammatical skills is because I did not try at the time it was late and I got lazy but I wanted it to continue the story because its good and I hate cliff hangers, and plus I thought the rules of this site say your allowed I did not know. User:H0rniWr1t3r

If you replied to my comment un ban H0rniWr1t3r and I will talk to you there instead of changing my public ip address, FYI I will not ever again write in your stories. I forgot the password of LookIdidNotMean2VandalismIamNewRemember either that or you deleted it! User:H0rniWr1t3r

Sorry if this is vandalism but I wanted you too see what I go through to understand why I am so "immature" . I changed the page because it was a joke only meant for me to see to cope with the stress and pain in my life that's why I deleted it. You really think someone like me has it easy I struggle with bipolar, severe borderline personality disorder,asd,ocd,schizophrenia,pstd,anxiety, depression, multiple personality disorder, grew up in another country and had to switch everything, got kicked out of the house when I was 18 cause I am bisexual, Not to mention I been abused as a child and I am studying penetration testing and I cannot screw up because I am trying to get a job my life is not easy and now I am thinking of committing suicide thanks to you because you crushed my hobby of writing I know I suck but I can at least pretend I am worth something. I think I am strong and continuing to grow do to what I go through! Its funny I called you a noob in IT but really I think I am the noob :( I guess I am not due to the fact my team says I am the best one there but yeah fucking right. The fact I am still standing loads of medication which is making me feel numb and queasy due to the crap side effects.User:H0rniWr1t3r

I don't know what I did wrong how did I do vandalism, I was just trying to comment you please don't ban me for this. I am new and just learning the ways of this site so please tell me how to do it the proper way. User:H0rniWr1t3r

Its me H0rniWr1t3r look I'm sorry about telling you to mind your own business, but I found your comment very rude and I was emotionally crushed than you would delete my pages because you think I am a bad writer and yet you allow other people to edit? so can we please talk this out though email or facebook or something this chat room sucks in my opinion. User:H0rniWr1t3r

I am terribly sorry to hear that D: I hope you have a fast recovery though, and good to know that you are at least okay, well, as okay as someone can be after surgery... --Dirty Me 18:13, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

o.O What happened? --Dirty Me 18:08, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

When you come back, you might want to check Special:Contributions/Darth_nox. I am not blanking his pages, just trying to fix them, but some of the stuff he is writing... --Dirty Me 03:52, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

Sooooo...I got Teejay to leave me options. When is platy going to leave me some? --Dirty Me 03:56, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, feel free to give him warning 2...I have already warned him about categories, then I gave him a non-warn2 warning before he got the second warning. Seems he isn't learning his lesson :o --Dirty Me 10:05, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

Note for you, some idiot wiped the adult index, and I cannot figure out how to restore because of "too many conflicting changes"...only thing I can see is recreating the entire thing...which would be a pain...I will leave it up to you to see if you can figure out how to fix. --Dirty Me 13:28, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

Please do not tell me what I can and can't edit, you should just mind your own goddamn business! I know I am not experienced in English its my second language. So can you please keep to your self. H0rniWr1t3r

Just wanted to say thanks for the reminder with category pages! Sorry that I caused the trouble. LilBitOfSpace

Just wanted to experiment! Did you like the rest of the story? Whining Winnie

Well if your not happy with that bit, I'll edit it out!......:-( Whining Winnie

It's not letting me add external links. I try to, then the page reloads asking me to enter a captcha. I do that and then a page pops up saying I can only submit one page with an external link every 20 minutes. Only I wasn't able to submit any. Any suggestions? Gr1mm 11:13 Central Time 1/15/2016

Don't forget that CLM is my first story. Of course it's going to have some issues and stuff. But practice makes perfect! Also I`ve added a few more pages and the reason I haven't been on was because I went to my friends funeral. He died in a car crash. RIP Jacob Pierre 1989-2016

Whining Winnie

Could you move CLM to the Adult Stories section? It's now got sex in it so I thought it should be moved to Adult. And is it rude that the druglord in my story is named El Faggetito? Whining Winnie 20/1/16 21:37 (AEST)

Damn. Well thanks for the reply anyway, though. Gr1mm 1:35 Central Time 1/21/2016

Thank you for maintaining the organization of the Force Awakens page as we get some new people writing. Cheers! - CodeSoldier

Hey, is it possible to have rate limits removed? I believe that is what they are referred to as. I just want to know if it's somehow possible to be verified or something such and remove the time limits. I.e. the 2 second un-cached page limit, the 60(?) page visit limit, the 20 minute page with a link limit. Thanks for your help. CodeSoldier 31/01/16

Hey, you left a message on my discussion page that my dialogue's punctuation and grammar is bad and I shouldn't post on your stories because of a page that I made on one of your stories, but the grammar seems fine to me and all you did was add a comma and change some wording around. So am I allowed to add pages to your story or should I not edit that story anymore? Fort 05/02/16

Relax… All I did was ask why you thought my grammar was bad because when I checked the edit, I only saw one punctuation edit and that didn’t seem to be enough to warrant your complaint that my pages were bad. When I looked again, I saw that there were three grammar edits, so I retracted my statement. I don’t quite understand your hostility towards a first-time editor, but I’ll remove my pages posthaste from your story Smutty Sex Romp as my writing is not good enough for your standards. I readded my previous comment for posterity's sake. --Fort 5 February 2016

I apologize for my "obsession with colons" when it comes to dialogue - I've been told my English grammar is rather good for a non-native speaker, but apparently that's one bad habit that's slipped through so far. Will definitely try to do better. - ETA later same day: Thanks. Hopefully you won't find as many wrong colons from now on... Shirasade 20/02/16

Really sorry, but I screwed up a link and accidentally created two identical pages with different titles. There is one page with no link to it and I can't see how to redirect or delete it. Apologies once again. Slk350 23/02/16

Thank you ever so much for fixing the problem so quickly. Slk350 24/02/16

I actually meant grammar sergeant about the intimidating xD For the other guy, he will probably be back on his next up swing. I am familiar many of his conditions. Honestly, nothing anyone here can do for him. Anyways, I mean check grammar sergeant's large deletions when I had a large addition on talk pages (His and a specific story talk page) and you will see why I ask if I was intimidating. --Dirty Me 02:46, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

Sorry to bother you about this and I apologize in advance if I sound too critical but I'm actually kinda curious about the "Feel her up for real since she's already slapped you" choice in "Darkness". I mean, why would someone choose to deliberately cop a feel on their sister in the middle of a mysterious blackout after they had found a note imploring them to stay? Also, why was there a katana or steel thing in the room where the protagonist was and why did you include the "I'm Your Brother" choice if the protagonist was a girl? It felt like a place where the reader could decide on the protagonist's gender even if it was a bit late. Sorry if this sounds too critical. - Fredhot16

I'm going to finish the above section in "Idea Pitches" in time. I've got projects to do. Sorry for delay. --User:Fredhot16 09:12, 10 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Woah. You actually know the nickname of the Venture. Well, one. The nickname in the core rulebook in the First Edition is "Lords". It's still cool, though. Thanks for the advice. I've got a question, though: how do you the copyright since I'm planning on copying the short descriptions of the clans from one of the pdfs of Vampire? Edit: I've found "Aristocrats" to be used in one of the NWOD Vampire novels so...you win this round. --User:Fredhot16 09:15, 11 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

You know what? I've finally decided about what to do that "feeling up" choice in "Darkness". Fuck it. FUCK. IT. Not only is the choice out of place, there is nothing that would suggest that the protagonist, Jenny, has any feelings or thoughts that would suggest she would do such a thing. And yes, I've read your note about how how choices don't need to seem logical but this is, simply put, not a good choice. Gepetto chose that choice because it was a fairy tale and illogical choices are a staple in that sort of thing. Thing is, I'm not against illogical choices. I'm not against unreasonable choices. Hell, I'm not even against stupid choices. I'm against unrealistic choices. I'm against a choice that does nothing to advance the story or even make an attempt to do so. So fuck that choice. As of now, I'm going to get rid of it when I've got the time. --User:Fredhot16 08:26, 18 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So to answer your question aboutMy Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure (yeah, it was over a year ago but...) anyway, Here's a short description of the story: it's basically a dating sim. Of a sort. I'm only calling a "dating sim: because, well, I've realized that if I were to put a genre into it, "dating sim" would be the closest one thought "slice of life" is a better description. If you have the patience to listen to me ramble on about what it's supposed to be, let me know.--User:Fredhot16 16:04, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I thought I'd ask an experienced user (I am very new) is it worth trying to resurrect/clean up a cluttered and/or messy story started by someone else. I'm having fun editing the Pokesex story but I'm more than a little put off by the lack of focus some of the things people added before I got there (Some joker added a shemale option at the beginning that had nothing to it and although there are some worthwhile ideas there are way too many categories and sub divisions) So the story is looking a little neglected but I quite like the set up. I'm new to the site so please excuse me if I get something wrong. (Oh by the way, is there a way to watch an entire branch of a story for edits?) --Helpless Newbie 8 April 2016

Yes, I do. However, I'm to categorize them later. Let's be honest: I am a very patchy writer. Also, I apologize for the "Darkness" choices. Let me ask: did you start the story? If so, can you please tell me what the story is supposed to be? Just want to know so i can be sure of what type of stuff to put in the story.--User:Fredhot16 08:37, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Thanks for the help with the previous thing. Unfortunately I've come back with another question; Is there a way to outright delete a page? I want to delete a series of pages that a user (Who was banned some time ago) added because they are stupid for the sake of being stupid. If that's impossible or against the rules I'll work around it but it would be helpful if I had the option --Helpless Newbie 10 April 2016

Hi, you deleted my page because you said it had already been created and deleted, when it was originally created earlier today I accidentally started making it on my home page because I was confused about how to go about it, but I was warned about having an unsorted story so I deleted all of it and put it in the mature section like I was supposed to originally. I'm very new to this site and was just confused. The original link doesn't exist anymore- at least I don't think it does. So I'm going to put my story back on there, because there's no need to rewrite something when you just put it in the wrong spot. Thank you for deleting though. --QueenPrisme 7:43pm April 13, 2016

Hey would it be kosher to set up the category page for someone else's story just out of the blue or should I ask them first? -- In The Worst Ways 1:44am April 16, 2016

Is there a way to make the page titles shorter, the ones at the top of the webpage not the address of the page (Apart from making the address shorter) I want to keep things neat and make it easy for people to find the beginning and stuff but the length for some of the pages is getting silly. If there isn't thats fine but I just wanted to know if I had the option. --Hellspawn 19 April 2016

Would you happen to be able to tell me if Leaving is past the point of me worrying about the pit or not? I know it takes a while to get to that point, but we may be ending up on the sidewalk soon, and I'm just worried it'll fall of the bottom if I can't get back online for a long time. -- In The Worst Ways 12:49pm 4/26/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

For the record, what is the page maximum for the pit? The main page says 10 pages but iirc I've seen stories in the pit with more than 10 pages. Again I know it takes a while for something to drop into the pit, and I know I can get it back out again, but I thought I'd ask.

I get paranoid cause I have a habit of unintentionally abandoning things and I'm still mildly worried about losing internet access soon. I'd like to get anything new I start past the point where it could fall into the pit just in case. -- In The Worst Ways 07:25, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

So, I'm trying to include an image in something, but the only way to do this is to link to an image outside of the wiki. Which would be fine, if it weren't for the fact that apparently said images are also under the rule of having to wait 20 minutes. Which again would be fine, if it didn't count hitting preview?

So if I want to see how it looks on the page I need to wait 20 minutes before I can see the changes I've made? And then, from past experience, if I try to submit the page I have to fill out a captcha and wait another 20 minutes before I can submit the captcha, by which point my session (every time I tried this at least) has been terminated?

Is there something I'm missing here? Are other people able to include links and images just fine and somehow I'm just completely screwing this up? Like I'm not trying to be ungrateful and I know you probably don't have control over any of this I'm just confused and I'm starting to get frustrated with the thing I'm trying to work on. Sorry for bothering you. -- In The Worst Ways 22:23, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

Hey, sorry about not seeing your messages earlier! I'll remember to categorize my pages. Sorry about that! -- User:Kal 23:11, 2 August 2016 (EST)

Hey, could you delete the following page of my story? The writing is awful, misspellings everywhere, horrible punctuation, and there aren't even any options. I tried, but I couldn't salvage it. Thanks. http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Make_her_the_first_whore_of_the_tribe,_all_are_welcome_to_fuck_her_and_impregnated_her User:Kanin452 23 October 2016

Sorry, Platypus. I thought I was punctuating where needed, but I'll proofread some of the things I've posted. I am an ESL student and trying to get better by writing short stories, and I suppose the short quips for Rampage and Smutty are ideal for this. I immensely enjoy both those and try to contribute where I can. But if I'm just a terrible writer getting in the way of progress, I'll just be content reading what others have posted. Thank you for the opportunity though. Cheers. - User:Wtfismook

Sorry. I try my best, but it seems that no matter how many times I look things over, or how carefully I read it, the little things slip on through. -Kanin452 6 December 2016

How to make my own story without disturbing the peace

I just wana know how to make my own story

1. There is a sidebar to the left

2. The second divider from the top remarks "search"

3. Enter through the input box the name of the story you'd like to create

4.Once on this page anew: note the tabs at the top of the page.

5.Impress the button that is prescribed the word create.

6.On formatting: There are buttons above the page to change the text and to include links to the next part of the story; including links to the next part of the story is vital for any interactive story. Create a link by typing in the name of the action the user may perform I.e [[Action]]. Replace "action" with what you want the character to be able to do.

7.If anything went wrong: Platypus the site moderator is always able to revert the changes

8.At the bottom of each page in your story: write down the story's category like this: [[Category:Story name]] At "Story name" put the name of your story.

9. If all goes according to plan, your page should be formatted like so:

Solemn ipsut Armet

Do you:

*[[Go to the left]] *[[Go to the right]] [[Category:Story]]

If your page looks like that: it should function rather blithe.

You got the chips, Heathin 19:52, 9 August 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I'm fairly new to this site and all I can say is wow. This is probably my favorite place on the internet. However, being a wiki means it can be edited by users and that's even more amazing. Again, just wow. Now, taking into consideration I'm a writer myself and love being part of group efforts. I would like to know if the contributions I've made will be unsatisfactory. I would like to know what the thoughts are on the pages I've created Here, Here, And Here. I have no problem if the moderator or another user edits the works. I mean that's kind of the point of a wiki. However, I'd like to know if i would be better off creating my own works from scratch. Thank you for your time. Kreaturewithak

Hey Platypus, do you know what's up with the website? Some time ago it had been out for a few weeks, then once back, it keeps fluctuating between slow, functional, and offline. Thanks in advance. --Darth Malcolm 11:26, 10 November 2016 (UTC)

Thank you. I still don't know how to use it properly but I'm learning a bit. I'll leave Category now :) If you want tell me something about let me know. Thanks mate. --Mind 00:12, 11 November 2016 (UTC)

Hey I'm new to this and I'm doing some work on the star wars erotic saga. I just titled some of it and I hope it works as a category. Is it okay now? EDIT: Thanks for the help. I'll be sure to do it from now on.

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